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Into the Starry Night

 

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Kay soooo. I like to write. A lot.
I do poems, songs, mini stories, you know. All that jazz.
I found my old poem from grade 8 in my english class. Pretty neat. I'm surprised I was capable of this.

"We cannot cure,
This world of sorrows.
Although, we can choose,
To live in joy,
Of your essence,
Your smile,
Your soul
And eyes.
Let me take a healthy dose,
As I hear your breath,
And feel your sighs,
Lifting my spirits,
Higher and higher,
Into the starry night,
That reminds me,
Of the sparkling in your eyes.
And by the way, I do believe,
The world is full of possibilities."
Kay soooo. I like to write. A lot.
I do poems, songs, mini stories, you know. All that jazz.
I found my old poem from grade 8 in my english class. Pretty neat. I'm surprised I was capable of this.

"We cannot cure,
This world of sorrows.
Although, we can choose,
To live in joy,
Of your essence,
Your smile,
Your soul
And eyes.
Let me take a healthy dose,
As I hear your breath,
And feel your sighs,
Lifting my spirits,
Higher and higher,
Into the starry night,
That reminds me,
Of the sparkling in your eyes.
And by the way, I do believe,
The world is full of possibilities."
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I think it should be, "Remind" in stead of "reminds" but otherwise I like it alot. It really makes me think of the endless night sky and the way it makes you think. Keep it up!
I think it should be, "Remind" in stead of "reminds" but otherwise I like it alot. It really makes me think of the endless night sky and the way it makes you think. Keep it up!
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