Maybe I'm about the get a bit deeper than necessary for a thread in Crazy House, but as someone who teaches grammar for a living, the "rules" aren't actually rules. If you pick up any piece of literature, any novel or short story, I can almost guarantee that you will see grammar rules being broken within the first few pages. It is extremely common, particularly in creative writing, to do things "incorrectly" for stylistic purposes. Writing incomplete sentences and putting periods after them, for example. Like I just did there. And again there. And a third time...
So if you want me to follow the rules of grammar as strictly as possible, the comma between "8/10" and "nothing" is incorrect because it is incorrect to use a comma between two independent clauses. ("I'll go with an 8/10" is an independent clause and so is "nothing really looked wrong to me.") To correct this, you could use a period, though personally I would choose a semicolon for added flair. "Idk" also is not a "real" abbreviation, so points off for that as well. I'd give you an 8 out of 10 overall.
But of course, that's only if you go by the book. And there are plenty of things I've done myself in this post that are not technically correct, but I've chosen to do anyway out of stylistic preference. So overall, I think your post is perfectly fine if that's the way you'd like to write it.
Maybe I'm about the get a bit deeper than necessary for a thread in Crazy House, but as someone who teaches grammar for a living, the "rules" aren't actually rules. If you pick up any piece of literature, any novel or short story, I can almost guarantee that you will see grammar rules being broken within the first few pages. It is extremely common, particularly in creative writing, to do things "incorrectly" for stylistic purposes. Writing incomplete sentences and putting periods after them, for example. Like I just did there. And again there. And a third time...
So if you want me to follow the rules of grammar as strictly as possible, the comma between "8/10" and "nothing" is incorrect because it is incorrect to use a comma between two independent clauses. ("I'll go with an 8/10" is an independent clause and so is "nothing really looked wrong to me.") To correct this, you could use a period, though personally I would choose a semicolon for added flair. "Idk" also is not a "real" abbreviation, so points off for that as well. I'd give you an 8 out of 10 overall.
But of course, that's only if you go by the book. And there are plenty of things I've done myself in this post that are not technically correct, but I've chosen to do anyway out of stylistic preference. So overall, I think your post is perfectly fine if that's the way you'd like to write it.