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Ash's past and fighting trainers. Chapter Ten. The end!

 

06-09-12 12:31 PM
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starwars293 :

The reason why pikachu got a single line is because the chapter focused on what happened to the frontier and the court scene.

Chapter 10 might come tonight, I don't know, but if it might be longer and I have to go on Tetris Friends for the battle 2p, and my daily lottery, I only win tokens there, but one time, I won 50HP for battle arena armor, nothing else.
starwars293 :

The reason why pikachu got a single line is because the chapter focused on what happened to the frontier and the court scene.

Chapter 10 might come tonight, I don't know, but if it might be longer and I have to go on Tetris Friends for the battle 2p, and my daily lottery, I only win tokens there, but one time, I won 50HP for battle arena armor, nothing else.
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First,the cross over with earthbound,and now,a cross over with Mario!You stories are great!How did you come up with this by the way?
First,the cross over with earthbound,and now,a cross over with Mario!You stories are great!How did you come up with this by the way?
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Giegas : It all came from my mind. I start with a legend of Zelda story, then pikachu, then the two Mario stories I have, then I have this story. I had to plan out what to do to please the people who read the story, I even think of what situation to put with the characters.
Giegas : It all came from my mind. I start with a legend of Zelda story, then pikachu, then the two Mario stories I have, then I have this story. I had to plan out what to do to please the people who read the story, I even think of what situation to put with the characters.
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Sweet chapter! The final chapter is almost underway, I'm so excited!
Sweet chapter! The final chapter is almost underway, I'm so excited!
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Just wondering. If you could, could you make a story about me after chapter 10 is posted?
Just wondering. If you could, could you make a story about me after chapter 10 is posted?
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Wow, your doing swell on your Fan Fic so far. I can't wait for the rest of it.
Wow, your doing swell on your Fan Fic so far. I can't wait for the rest of it.
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retrokid12 : I won't be working on the chapter until tommorrow, so you, starwars293, Geigas, and lugiaboy have to wait until tommorrow for the finale.

starwars293 : That is a really hard question, the history part of you would be the hardest, so that story of you will never possibly happen.

lugiaboy : There is only 1 chapter left, read the other chapters first, please. Tommorrow is the big finale!
retrokid12 : I won't be working on the chapter until tommorrow, so you, starwars293, Geigas, and lugiaboy have to wait until tommorrow for the finale.

starwars293 : That is a really hard question, the history part of you would be the hardest, so that story of you will never possibly happen.

lugiaboy : There is only 1 chapter left, read the other chapters first, please. Tommorrow is the big finale!
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Stevie 764 : Well, ok then
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Sorry for the very long delay, here it is.


Cast for chapter 10:
Ash
Mewtwo (has ability to transform into Giygas)
Wario (cameo)
Gatekeeper (only two lines, scared by Mewtwo)
Police

(No Ness or Poo, sorry, they are back at their world, so they are back in Earthbound world. They already said goodbye to Mewtwo)

Chapter 10, the end!

[Narrator] So when Ash and Pikachu meet up with Mewtwo, they talk about going to Wario's house and see if he really was broke.

[Ash] I was wondering if Wario was really poor in his life.

[Mewtwo] I will check in his house and see if he really is poor.


[Narrator] So when Mewtwo makes it to the house of Wario...

[Mewtwo] (whispering to self) Now to sneak in there and find out how poor Wario is.

[Gatekeeper] Stop, where do you think you are going?

[Mewtwo] Watch yourself, for I am- *transforms into Giygas*

[Giygas] The spine chilling Giygas!

[Gatekeeper] *Screams all the way to home*

[Giygas] *transforms back to Mewtwo*

[Mewtwo] Awesome, now to find the bills.

[Narrator] But then...

[Mewtwo] What the...!? A combination? How is it possible to crack the code before the gatekeeper comes back!? Wait a minute, I did remember seeing a pass next to the gatekeeper... I found it. *picks it up* Ok, "Turn the lock to the right 3 times and stop at 7. Turn the lock to the left twice and stop at 7. Turn the lock to the right once and stop at 7." The lucky 777? *enters combination* It works! Time to enter the house.

[Narrator] When Mewtwo gets inside though...


[Mewtwo] This place is deserted! I can't believe Wario was that broke his life after buying a moon. Also, his face was on that moon, I remember hearing about it when Palkia communicated through pokemon language about Wario being on a moon. Time for me to investigate this house for possible dollars he might have hidden.

[Narrator] When Mewtwo finds two different rooms while investigating...

[Mewtwo] Wario's secret room and Wario's non-secret room? I bet Wario is hiding something in the secret room. *opens secret room door* WHAT? Nothing is in there! I wonder if he was hiding a trick. *opens non-secret room door*

[Wario] APRIL FOOLS!!! HA HA HA H-

[Mewtwo] *Punches Wario, KO'ed him unconsious* That nearly scared me to death. Time to investigate the room.

[Narrator] But when he looks under Wario's bed...

[Mewtwo] What the...!? He put ALL his money in there? I believe he managed to break free out of jail. Time to call the police! *dials 666 on phone*

[Mewtwo] Come on, pick up, pick up!

[Police] Hello, who's this?

[Mewtwo] I am Mewtwo. I am calling to report that Wario has escaped jail and he has the money stash again from that Battle Frontier.

[Police] We will get to his house and he has to die because he is nothing but a thief, and he even wants money from everyone in the world.

[Mewtwo] Yes! Awesome sauce! Oh, I almost forgot. His address is "666 Wario Land Rd."

[Police] Awesome, just wait 5 minutes and we will be there.

[Mewtwo] *hangs up* Cant wait to see what will happen to him at jail.


[Narrator] 5 minutes later...

*police siren*

[Mewtwo] Yes! (To unconsious Wario) You are now...

[Police] Under arrest, Wario! ...  What happened to him?

[Mewtwo] I knocked him out unconsious. You can just drive him there and lock him in a jail cell, can't wait to see how he will freak out.

[Police] Ok, thanks Mewtwo!

[Mewtwo] Thanks.


[Narrator] At jail...


[Police] Wario, you will be prisoned until you're dead. *leaves*

[Wario] Huh? Where am I? *gasps* NOOOOOOOOO!!! DOH I MISSED!!!

[Mewtwo] Ha ha ha ha, how do you like that, Wario?

[Wario] I HATE THIS WORLD! KILL ME!!!

[Mewtwo] You know what? How about you stay in that cell without any survival stuff with you until you die from a "rot"?



[Narrator] Back at the Pokemon World...

[Mewtwo] I came back, I found out that wario escaped, I called him back in to jail, I even told the police his address.

[Ash] Wow, he will never return again?

[Mewtwo] Thank god the answer is "Yes".

[Ash] Will this be the last time you will visit?

[Mewtwo] Hopefully not. I will be visiting occasionly.

[Ash] Ok. Good bye, Mewtwo!

[Mewtwo] Bye! I will visit once in a while. *teleports to home*

[Ash] I guess that this is, THE END!



THE END.


Credits:

Cast:

Ash
Pikachu
Gary
Mewtwo
Giygas
Gatekeeper
Wild pokemon: Caterpie and Weedle
Ness
Poo
Police
Mario & Luigi
Wario
Ace Attorney
Judge



Maker of the story: Stevie 764


Copyright: Stevie 764, 2012.



Now, this is the perfect time to put either:

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Thanks for reading this wonderful story, and I shall see you later!  
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starwars293 :  
Giegas :  

Sorry for the very long delay, here it is.


Cast for chapter 10:
Ash
Mewtwo (has ability to transform into Giygas)
Wario (cameo)
Gatekeeper (only two lines, scared by Mewtwo)
Police

(No Ness or Poo, sorry, they are back at their world, so they are back in Earthbound world. They already said goodbye to Mewtwo)

Chapter 10, the end!

[Narrator] So when Ash and Pikachu meet up with Mewtwo, they talk about going to Wario's house and see if he really was broke.

[Ash] I was wondering if Wario was really poor in his life.

[Mewtwo] I will check in his house and see if he really is poor.


[Narrator] So when Mewtwo makes it to the house of Wario...

[Mewtwo] (whispering to self) Now to sneak in there and find out how poor Wario is.

[Gatekeeper] Stop, where do you think you are going?

[Mewtwo] Watch yourself, for I am- *transforms into Giygas*

[Giygas] The spine chilling Giygas!

[Gatekeeper] *Screams all the way to home*

[Giygas] *transforms back to Mewtwo*

[Mewtwo] Awesome, now to find the bills.

[Narrator] But then...

[Mewtwo] What the...!? A combination? How is it possible to crack the code before the gatekeeper comes back!? Wait a minute, I did remember seeing a pass next to the gatekeeper... I found it. *picks it up* Ok, "Turn the lock to the right 3 times and stop at 7. Turn the lock to the left twice and stop at 7. Turn the lock to the right once and stop at 7." The lucky 777? *enters combination* It works! Time to enter the house.

[Narrator] When Mewtwo gets inside though...


[Mewtwo] This place is deserted! I can't believe Wario was that broke his life after buying a moon. Also, his face was on that moon, I remember hearing about it when Palkia communicated through pokemon language about Wario being on a moon. Time for me to investigate this house for possible dollars he might have hidden.

[Narrator] When Mewtwo finds two different rooms while investigating...

[Mewtwo] Wario's secret room and Wario's non-secret room? I bet Wario is hiding something in the secret room. *opens secret room door* WHAT? Nothing is in there! I wonder if he was hiding a trick. *opens non-secret room door*

[Wario] APRIL FOOLS!!! HA HA HA H-

[Mewtwo] *Punches Wario, KO'ed him unconsious* That nearly scared me to death. Time to investigate the room.

[Narrator] But when he looks under Wario's bed...

[Mewtwo] What the...!? He put ALL his money in there? I believe he managed to break free out of jail. Time to call the police! *dials 666 on phone*

[Mewtwo] Come on, pick up, pick up!

[Police] Hello, who's this?

[Mewtwo] I am Mewtwo. I am calling to report that Wario has escaped jail and he has the money stash again from that Battle Frontier.

[Police] We will get to his house and he has to die because he is nothing but a thief, and he even wants money from everyone in the world.

[Mewtwo] Yes! Awesome sauce! Oh, I almost forgot. His address is "666 Wario Land Rd."

[Police] Awesome, just wait 5 minutes and we will be there.

[Mewtwo] *hangs up* Cant wait to see what will happen to him at jail.


[Narrator] 5 minutes later...

*police siren*

[Mewtwo] Yes! (To unconsious Wario) You are now...

[Police] Under arrest, Wario! ...  What happened to him?

[Mewtwo] I knocked him out unconsious. You can just drive him there and lock him in a jail cell, can't wait to see how he will freak out.

[Police] Ok, thanks Mewtwo!

[Mewtwo] Thanks.


[Narrator] At jail...


[Police] Wario, you will be prisoned until you're dead. *leaves*

[Wario] Huh? Where am I? *gasps* NOOOOOOOOO!!! DOH I MISSED!!!

[Mewtwo] Ha ha ha ha, how do you like that, Wario?

[Wario] I HATE THIS WORLD! KILL ME!!!

[Mewtwo] You know what? How about you stay in that cell without any survival stuff with you until you die from a "rot"?



[Narrator] Back at the Pokemon World...

[Mewtwo] I came back, I found out that wario escaped, I called him back in to jail, I even told the police his address.

[Ash] Wow, he will never return again?

[Mewtwo] Thank god the answer is "Yes".

[Ash] Will this be the last time you will visit?

[Mewtwo] Hopefully not. I will be visiting occasionly.

[Ash] Ok. Good bye, Mewtwo!

[Mewtwo] Bye! I will visit once in a while. *teleports to home*

[Ash] I guess that this is, THE END!



THE END.


Credits:

Cast:

Ash
Pikachu
Gary
Mewtwo
Giygas
Gatekeeper
Wild pokemon: Caterpie and Weedle
Ness
Poo
Police
Mario & Luigi
Wario
Ace Attorney
Judge



Maker of the story: Stevie 764


Copyright: Stevie 764, 2012.



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Thanks for reading this wonderful story, and I shall see you later!  
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Great finally!I loved this story.And I hope you make another one!
Great finally!I loved this story.And I hope you make another one!
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Pretty good ending, but I was kinda hoping for a better, more exciting ending. But hey, great work! I could never write something as good as that!
Pretty good ending, but I was kinda hoping for a better, more exciting ending. But hey, great work! I could never write something as good as that!
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retrokid12 : Oh. Well, I tried to make a good ending.

Giegas : you could suggest a story for me through either PM or comment on my profile comments.
retrokid12 : Oh. Well, I tried to make a good ending.

Giegas : you could suggest a story for me through either PM or comment on my profile comments.
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Great job!
You have done a job well done!
Great job!
You have done a job well done!
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Thanks, I am probably the youngest person to write a "awesome sauce" story like this.


Everyone, think about what story I shall do next, that is really important, then post it here.
Thanks, I am probably the youngest person to write a "awesome sauce" story like this.


Everyone, think about what story I shall do next, that is really important, then post it here.
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