A user of this :

The spotlight might be on you, but the light is dimming.
Remember who you're battling? You have no chance of winning.
Whoever said you had talent, well they were obviously kidding.
This is the end of the line and you are only beginning.

Didn't your mother ever tell you not to play in a flame.
Because you might as well be getting burnt when you rap in this game.
Your words don't flow together, and your style is too lame.
You hoping to win this for a few seconds of fame.

But it really is too bad for you, mister User of This.
You came hard, fighting strong. But you aimed and you missed.
You must have thought you would win. And ignorance is bliss.
Compared to me though, your skill belongs in a deep dark abyss

Since I didn't win, I have to secure this position.
So I'm going to scope you out, and then attack with precision.
Losing this time won't knock me into submission.
You look like a visionless engineer engineering his vision.

So first of all, you are last place at best
User of this listen, you aren't passing the test.
My words going to you is like a shot in the chest.
It'll leave your heart choking, but it is all just in jest.

User of this? You're a user that should quit
You're resting place will be inside Last Place the pit.
Go ahead and cry to mommy saying "He bullied me like a twit."
And she'll say, "You're so lame, you probably deserved it."

Tyrian Delirium :

You say that people will forget me, funny that is a mystery
Like how do people forget the one who goes down in history
As maybe not the greatest forum rapper known to some
But the one who is without a doubt better than Delirium

Back up now, former champion is exactly what you are
You might have won once but this time you are falling far
And bragging about having millions make you seem kind of funny
If anyone saw it they would say it was monopoly money.

Anyways, the point I'm making with this attack
Is that as far as I see, you have rhymes that are whack.
You have a little flow I will give you that one.
But take a good look, Scarlot's the new champion.

I wanna start by saying Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays,
not that it really matters since I'm winning this anyways,
and when I get done with this rhyming, I know I'll see your head spinning.
You must be blind not to see that! No 20-20 vision.

I'm scarlot, said scarlet like the color I'm burning red hot
Trying to compare to me is like, "Son, you better not."
Stop what you're doing now, it'll be sad to have to watch you fall
I'm gathering all the Viz and the trophies. Gotta Catch 'Em All!

Do you see that thing that's headed towards us on the street.
That's a victory. You'll never get one it's coming to me to meet.
Honestly, at this point you even trying is treason.
Just so you know, I already have my hand up for a reason.

LunarDarkness2 : Since you asked nicely. (Now you owe me! Mwahahaha! o-o)

Stepping up to the plate, and I'm aiming for the podium.
Competition gets saltier than chloride and some sodium.
I say I'm gonna win this you say I'm a visionary.
But I'll be going on forever, this isn't temporary.

If a problem is what you have, you had better solve it.
You put your rhymes next to mine they dissolve like a solvent.
No one, especially you, can compare to my mentality.
I'll hit you with a K-K-Kombo Breaker! FATALITY!

You're a worm on the ground I'm a predator in the sky.
Thought you could beat me when you saw me? My words were still in disguise.
You need to pinch yourself and wake up, you're dreaming if you think you're better.
Show your true colors and wear that SCARLOT letter!

I'm not too excited about any recent movies except for one but I already watched it. There is one movie that I am plaaning on watching sometime this week though and it is called Ano hi mita hana no namae o bokutachi wa mada shiranai (AnoHana: The Flower We Saw There) I just have to finish the anime first.

I don't know either one of you but congratulations anyways! I love it when people are happy so this made my day. Here is a happy face for your both together.

Now here are happy faces for you separately.
 For Makalya
 For Galacta

My father, oh my god. We had this laptop and we would take in the bathroom with us when we went (my brother and I) and my mother thought we were doing inappropriate things with it. So my father installed a screen recording app on it while we were at school one day and turned it on and left it running while we were on it. We weren't doing anything inappropriate but they didn't finally come clean about what they did for three weeks. They monitored everything we did on the computer at all for three weeks without us even knowing. It was oay because in the end we understood their worries and they started to trust us more than they had before.

supernerd117 : Alright. I'll be waiting. I love seeing these though. They are funny. Even when some people fail at following rules. If you make another thread for the actual rap battle, summon me to it so I know and can check it out.

Eniitan : Thanks. I am have played Persona 1, 2, 3 and 4 (a little of Q) and I am going to watch Persona: Trinity Souls before I continue. I have designed the characters already (as far as personality and situations go) and I am very pleased with them so far. As far as the plotline itself, aside from the references to previous entries in the series (Persona is a subseries of Shin Megami Tensei and a very good one too. You can play 1 and 2 on this site as they are PSX games) it is its own story in its entirety.

Spoiler Alert:

The story is very interesting because it involves a cyber world, mixed memories, multiple personalities and other stuff. Each Persona series is based around a central theme, though I only know that 3 is Death and 4 is Truth (I think) Persona Ace is Reality because the entire story takes place in "Reality" and "Egality" (Egality being a world built inside the cyberspace which is revealed to actually be the world that holds and connects the subconscious minds of all human beings) which actually all takes place in the mind of the Protagonist (Nagato Matoi) whilst in a coma that was induced by events that occured in the beginning of the story only instead of him escaping it like he did in the plot he actually doesn't. (Hint: He gets ran over in real life after meeting his best friend Yamanoto Shisuke in the real world, whom no one even remembers after Matoi wakes up from his coma and starts wondering where his friends went. The scary part is, they all exist in the real world in some way and retain some memory from the events that took place in Matoi's mind while he was in a coma because Egality actually exists so everything that happened in Egality they all still hold in their subconscious mind.

As the game description originally stated

"Persona: Ace is more than a simple story. It is an epic detailing the lives of a group of students who must face reality head on, without knowing if it is real or not. In a tale of friends, explore the dark depths of humans minds and their corruptions while exploring the subconscious world known as Egality to learn that the differences between what is real and what is not are not always clear. Experience the tale of love and hate, trust and betrayal, truth and lie, and the impact that these have on people. Journey to the depths of the soul in an attempt to save the world and tap into the inner self in order to discover who you really are. Discover, your Persona!"

P.S. The main cast consists of: (In Last Name First Name Japanese style)

Protagonists:
Nagato Matoi
Yamanoto Shisuke
Tabane Haku (Who is the illegitimate child of the father of one of the main characters of Persona 3. Non-canon of course.)
Hidashi Arisa
Kitsurugi Yamato
Sakura Kiru
Neko Fuugito
Sonoto Michael

Protagonist's Helpers:
Igor (From the other Persona games)
Sonoto Alexander (Who helps Igor in the Velvet Room which in Persona is the center of the Persona ability and in Ace was created by the Sonoto Twins.)
Hizan Takagura (A member of the bad guys that secretly helps out the party and retires from the bad guys (Nightwalkers) after being "saved" by the group)

Main Antagonists: (Keeping it simple so other than the twelve nightwalkers)
Nagato Reiji
Hatsurame Chiyo
Adachi Koutetsu

Nightwalkers: (Instead of listing their full names, because they don't all have them yet [suggestions appreciated] these are their codenames. Which is just the Japanese names of the months without 'tsu')
Ichiga
Niga
Sanga
Shiga
Goga
Rokuga
Sichiga
Hachiga (This one is Hizan Takagura, the one that becomes a good guy.)
Kuga
Juuga
Juuichiga
Juuniga

That was a lot of typing.

Fun Fact:
The NIghtwalker Juuniga is the leader, Hatsurame Chiyo, which is not the same one under the antagonists list because they are two different people from two different families, one being from Reality, the other a creation of fragmented memories from Egality.

Another Fun Fact:
Reiji and Matoi are not actually brothers. Matoi is the son of Nagato Jinsei, a world renowned scientist that created a device that would allow the subconscious mind of humans to enter Egality. The was stolen by Nyarlathotep, who wanted to cause chaos between humans but could not do so directly, so that he could destroy humans from inside. Jinsei expected someone to want to steal the device when they found out about it and installed an AI capable of actual human thoughts by borrowing the thoughs and emotions embedded in all the minds that exist withing Egality. He named it Reiji (which means Courteous Child) as he was to be the protector of memory and Egality as well as helper to mankind, however Nyarlathotep caused a glitch in the AI causing him to draw from the malevolence of the humans minds instead. From this point until the climax of the story, he takes on the alias Ranmyaku (which means Chaos)

I want to be in it. If any spots open and I'm high enough on the list tell me. Definitely want to try and be a part of it next time though.

I am wanting to begin writing a fan fiction series but I don't know exactly how to start. I have a general story plan but I don't know how exactly I should write it (like format and spacing and stuff) and where I should upload it or anything like that.

It's basically a new entry in Persona that my brother and I were going to turn into a RPG Maker game but due to restraints (as in neither of us code or do graphics and we coudln't find anyone to help that could either) we decided to scrap the game. Now, I don't want our ideas to die (seeing as the story connects every incident from Persona - Persona 4 together in one huge storyline whilst having a diverse and unique cast of characters, according to us anyways) so I want to create a fan fiction of it. I have the first small part of the prologue (set before the events of Persona 1) but I really want someone's opinion on it and how I can improve it and stuff before I continue and before I finish. Any fanfic writers out there, if you could please give me tips on how to be a better fanfic writer then please, give them to me. This is what I have typed so far.

Persona Ace

The rain pours hard on the roof of the
building that sits on the hill. The thunder sounds off loud, with a
bellowing rage. The lightning flashes bright lights from above the
clouds. The ground is soaking wet, the floor inside the building
flooding due to holes in the roof. But, the water from the rain
wasn't the only thing wetting the floor. It was only wet by the
people who resided within.
“Come closer Alexander,” a young
boy said. He was wearing a white shirt and had long, flowing blonde
hair. His eyes were blue, but a very light blue color. He looked
rather young, like an elementary school child.
The other child, Alexander, sat still
like he had not heard the young boy. After a minute, he looked up and
had tears in his eyes. He stood abruptly and ran to the young boy's
side.
“Big brother Michael, I'm scared,”
Alexander cried. Alexander looked near identical to his brother
Michael. Their features exactly the same, except Alexander wore a
blue shirt and had shorter hair.
“Big brother Michael, why are we
still here? It's cold and wet. Mum isn't back yet?”
“No, Alexander, I'm afraid Mum isn't
back yet. We'll just have to wait. I'm sure she'll be here soon.
She'll be here soon.”
“I hope so. I'm so cold Michael. I'm
so cold.”
As Alexander says this he re-positions
himself and moves closer to Michael in an attempt to warm himself up.
Michael moves one arm to wipe away
tears from his eyes. He isn't crying because the building is wet and
he is cold. Rather he is crying for an entirely different reason. He
is crying because he knows the truth, the truth that he hasn't told
Alexander for a reason.
The two brothers, twins actually, were
born to a rich English family in 1989. However, they were never
loved. Michael remembers this, although Alexander represses the
memory. Their father fell ill a few years later and passed away in
1994. Their mother, who hated their guts, left them in a deserted,
abandoned building in the English countryside.
Michael tried his best to stay strong
through it all, he tried to stay strong for his brother. But he
couldn't forever and he knew that. After living there for a couple of
months, the cold air was getting the better of them and they were
both sick.
They lied down, they tried to sleep,
but the intense cold was preventing them from drifting off. Saying
prayers, they were huddled together in the middle of the night,
thinking that there was a chance, a hopefully very slight chance,
that this could be their last night. They came to grips with that
harsh reality but still wanted to stop it from coming true.
And then they heard a loud crash.
At first they were not alerted to the noises. Maybe its because they were trying to ignore everything and
focus on keeping warm, maybe it was because they thought it was a
part of the storm that they couldn't escape from.

MY favorite so far is either Brook or Trafalgar D. Law. I love Brook for his comedy and Trafalgar for his sheer awesomeness. (Although as far as laughs go Caesar Clown takes the cake. Shurorororo!!!!)

OMG, yes. I love it (although I skipped all the episodes that he was actually fighting Beerus because that was boring to me.) The only thing I don't like so far in Super is how they are calling it Super Saiyan Blue. Super Saiyan Blue is about the dumbest thing I have ever heard. Seriously, I think its dumber than Super Saiyan God Super Saiyan. Which is kinda bad.

For me it really depends on a couple of things

1) If I am doing something else while watching. (For example watching Anime and posting stuff on here)

2) If the dub does a good job (So no atrocities like the animax Fairy Tail dub)

and 3) If I am watching it in public or not (because I watch Anime in my free time at school so I watch sub then obviously)

As far as my preferences, I try to watch the dub but I end up watching subbed more and the more you watch sub the easier it is to follow. Although, watching anime on a 42" tv through an HDMI cable always helps, am I right.

I do have one thing to say though, if you prefer dubbed over subbed and you actually like anime a lot, don't just say no to subbed anime because I used to watch dub only but started watching subbed and there are so many great anime out there you will miss out on if you only watch dubbed. According to the 32 days worth of anime that myanimelist.net says I have watched, you can trust me on this. There are so many gems out there that aren't dubbed that you need to watch. 

I'm done.

Eniitan : I definitely will. I'm probably going to finish it in the next two or three days. I only took a break to rewatch Naruto and I have 10 episodes left on it. I really love it so far. Osaka's voice is kinda strange to me but it also adds to the comedy of it imo. It reminds a lot of some of the slice of life comedies I love so much and yes, the amount of laughter does hurt. It hurts, but it hurts so good. I don't think anything will ever make me laugh more than Puu Chan did though. (Seriously, if you haven't watched Best Student Council yet you need to. I loved it and I would recommend it to anyone, especially someone who enjoyed Azumanga Daioh)

Eniitan : I watched the dub too. I am rewatching slowly (like one or two episodes a week right now) and when I get done I'm gonna watch the rest. I didn't keep watching PreCure because I was watching it on my tablet when it broke and I just haven't started watching it again yet. I normally watch a couple anime at one time. (I'm watching about 5 or six right now). If you checked out my profile on Myanimelist.net you would see a bunch of titles that I watched just the first few episodes of to see if I liked them or not then I bookmark them to finish them for later. PreCure was one of those. I'll probably go back and watch it when I finish some of my current series though.

I remember that character from Popo-Tan that was acting like a magical girl and she walways said this one line that I still remember.

"Picohan Magical Parallel Magical Ray" (I think I spelled that right)

I'm not sure which ones people would freak out over so I'm just gonna post the anime I have rewatched in the order that I rewatched them.

Arakawa Under The Bridge
Zatch Bell
Arakawa Under The Bridge
Naruto
Strange+
Arakawa Under The Bridge

(Arakawa Under The Bridge is obviously my favorite).

You should totally use Revolution by Kopek. It would make for a really awesome AMV imo. If not that then you can use something like Let's Go by Clear the Chaos.

Oh my god yes! I am watching it right now, cycling between it C- The Money of Soul and Possibility Control and Hyouka. It is hilarious! It was recommended to me by my friend after I finihed Best Student Council amd I love it ao far. (I'm on episode 7) The thought of those detachable pigtails is strange though. My brother and I were juat like "So that can happen?"