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06-01-12 02:18 PM
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It sounds pretty good, keep working on it. What I think you should do though, is think of something memorable, something that will get stuck in your head. Try listening to different types and styles of music, you might get a few good ideas. Also, I agree with the commentator on Newgrounds. You should work on the quality of your music a little bit. |
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04-07-12 06:08 PM
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pi0x : Well to be honest, as much as I liked it, it did get a little boring. This may not work for you, but try listening to your songs as if you were the audience, if you find it boring and feel like falling asleep, then chances are that others will too. |
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03-10-12 01:54 PM
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pi0x : The first link is dead, just so you know. The second song is ok. It's not as good as some of your past work. This one seems to be missing something. I think you're doing a good job, and you just need to keep working at it. I would like to hear the first song if possible. The second song is ok. It's not as good as some of your past work. This one seems to be missing something. I think you're doing a good job, and you just need to keep working at it. I would like to hear the first song if possible. |
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02-16-12 09:20 PM
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Damn, It's such a hard choice. I mean I would choose Pixar and Studio Ghibli over Disney any day, (certain Disney movies would have a chance, but only a select few), but choosing between Pixar and Studio Ghibli is a hard thing to do. Both studios are great in their own right, but they make different types of movies. I would have to go with Studio Ghibli this time though. |
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02-03-12 11:29 PM
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pi0x : They are a fusion of classical and rock. Like I said before, they aren't on the internet any wherem otherwise I would have posted a link. If you want I can e-mail the mp3s. pi0x : They are a fusion of classical and rock. Like I said before, they aren't on the internet any wherem otherwise I would have posted a link. If you want I can e-mail the mp3s. |
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02-03-12 10:50 PM
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pi0x : I hear you man. There's been many a time, not just with music, that I've completely over-thought everything. And I was serious about the bass line and the title. other that that it sounds good. I've made a couple of songs using Finale. They aren't on the internet any where, so I can't post a link. but If you want to hear them, maybe we can work something out. |
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02-03-12 06:46 PM
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It sounds GREAT!!! If I may say, it was much better than the last one you showed us. It builds in the beginning and then it goes some where. However I would suggest giving the song a strong bass line, especially for the second half. A strong bass line will really drive it along and give it momentum. Also, I know that "Wave of Popular Sensation" is just a working title, but I think you should keep it. It fits the song very well. |
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12-22-11 01:31 AM
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pi0x : Nice job. You have some good things in that song. If I may offer some musical advise though, you should try adding more variety, as far as rhythm is concerned, to you songs. You want the music to go somewhere. What you have happening in your song, is it builds slightly at the beginning, then it sort of plateaus with not much happening. Finally, at the end, it fades out. What you should try to do with future songs is trying not to plateau in the middle. |
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12-22-11 01:15 AM
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Right now I'm too busy to even think about dating, but thats beside the point. There are a few things that I look for in a girl. I look for girls who are kind, friendly, considerate, intelligent, caring, TRUSTWORTHY, faithful, good looking, humble, clean, have good morals, and are willing to accept me for who I am, faults and all ( I hate shallow people). If at all possible, they have to be an artist of some kind, preferably a musician (a real musician, not just someone who says they are to impress their friends). It may seem like I'm picky, but I'm not. I just have high standards. |
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12-21-11 11:34 PM
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tonetone714 : I can see where your coming from, I honestly hadn't thought about it in that way. However that would only make it legal for those drug cartels to do business. Plus, it doesn't change the fact that there are countless medical dangers associated with weed. I realize the same thing could be said about alcohol, but, please correct me if I'm wrong (in a civil and polite manner), at least it's good for you if you drink every once in a while. |
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What about covering songs on different instruments?
I wrote an orchestral setting of Rush's Red Barchetta. It actually sounds great. I wrote an orchestral setting of Rush's Red Barchetta. It actually sounds great. |
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11-29-11 06:42 AM
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thenumberone : You still haven't explained to me why you think what I said was wrong. What I said was that if every one is allowed to carry a gun in public, criminals would be less likely to shoot people because they know that every one else could shoot him/her back. If there is a problem with this, then please by all means point it out, and provide a valid reason as to why you think that way. Don't just make stupid remarks without being able to back it up. So again, I ask you to please explain why you say my logic is wrong. If you can provide a valid reason, then I'd be glad to listen. If not then BE QUIET. thenumberone : You still haven't explained to me why you think what I said was wrong. What I said was that if every one is allowed to carry a gun in public, criminals would be less likely to shoot people because they know that every one else could shoot him/her back. If there is a problem with this, then please by all means point it out, and provide a valid reason as to why you think that way. Don't just make stupid remarks without being able to back it up. So again, I ask you to please explain why you say my logic is wrong. If you can provide a valid reason, then I'd be glad to listen. If not then BE QUIET. |
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11-28-11 08:26 PM
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thenumberone : That was not my point. If you strive to be better, then more power to you. However my purpose for referencing the movie, was to point out the very real danger of this being taken too far. In GATTACA, the ability to choose what traits your unborn child will exhibit, caused segregation on a global scale. As a result, if you exhibited the traits to be a swimmer, than you HAD to be a swimmer. If you tried to be something other than a swimmer, you would be turned away almost immediately, because of your genetic traits. Society had gotten to the point where it didn't matter what kind of person you were, or what your values were, or anything. The only thing that mattered was your genetic makeup and in turn what traits you exhibited. If this were to happen, then the U.S. would be no better than a Communist country. thenumberone : That was not my point. If you strive to be better, then more power to you. However my purpose for referencing the movie, was to point out the very real danger of this being taken too far. In GATTACA, the ability to choose what traits your unborn child will exhibit, caused segregation on a global scale. As a result, if you exhibited the traits to be a swimmer, than you HAD to be a swimmer. If you tried to be something other than a swimmer, you would be turned away almost immediately, because of your genetic traits. Society had gotten to the point where it didn't matter what kind of person you were, or what your values were, or anything. The only thing that mattered was your genetic makeup and in turn what traits you exhibited. If this were to happen, then the U.S. would be no better than a Communist country. |
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11-28-11 07:39 PM
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thenumberone : Please explain why. thenumberone : Please explain why. |
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11-28-11 07:37 PM
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Ok here's the deal. Weed is illegal for good reason. In fact we had a project in my civics class where we had to make our own political party. Almost all of the groups were for the legalization of weed and other drugs. My group and one other were against the legalization of drugs. The other group didn't give a reason why, but my reason was that a lot of weed dealers obtain it directly/indirectly from illegal drug cartels. Much of the money those drug cartels make directly funds terrorist organizations. So the fact that weed is illegal has a lot to do with national security. ">https://www.vizzed.com/boards/cuteeditor_files/Style/SyntaxHighlighter.css); |
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11-28-11 07:10 PM
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thenumberone : Well look at it this way. If every one was allowed to carry a gun, people would be less likely to try to shoot each other because they know that just about every other person can shoot back at them. |
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11-28-11 06:31 PM
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I am fine with genetic engineering, but only to a certain extent. I am against genetic engineering in humans. Your basically playing God. I saw a movie called GATTACA one day. It took place in a future where we could cure genetic diseases and even choose which traits you want your kid to have. Naturally, this became a fad with parents across the globe. This lead to segregation based on genetic traits, almost to the point where you were either genetically perfect, or genetically imperfect. And you really had no control over your life. The human life was regulated by genetic engineers. The protagonist was a man who's parents were purist at the time of his birth. Thus his heart condition was not cured. He strived to become an astronaut and almost made it, only to be turned away because he was not genetically perfect. ">https://www.vizzed.com/boards/cuteeditor_files/Style/SyntaxHighlighter.css);
The scary thing is that, just like I,Robot, the events in the movie can actually happen. The scary thing is that, just like I,Robot, the events in the movie can actually happen. |
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11-28-11 04:42 PM
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There is also a program called Finale. It lets you compose music for a variety of instruments. It also has a playback feature so you can here what your music sounds like. You can even print your music in a clean, professional format. While the full version is pretty expensive at $500, There are other versions for those who can't afford to pay for the full version. I use the $50 version called Finale Songwriter, and highly recommend it. ">https://www.vizzed.com/boards/cuteeditor_files/Style/SyntaxHighlighter.css); |
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09-28-11 06:37 AM
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Ok, I have begun work on an arrangement of Rush's Red Barchetta for a string orchestra. What do you think I should do as far as writing the parts for Violin, Viola, Cello, and Double Bass? What, if anything, would make it easier to write?">https://www.vizzed.com/vizzedboard/cuteeditor_files/Style/SyntaxHighlighter.css); |
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Red Barchetta or The Spirit of Radio by Rush">https://www.vizzed.com/vizzedboard/cuteeditor_files/Style/SyntaxHighlighter.css); |
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