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   It of course was a day like any other I guess, all day it seemed to pour and shower in rain. At first it seemed the gray clouds would never part, and never cease to it's crying. But it was on this poor day that I had an encounter that seemed fateful to the extent of being questionable was this encounter mean't to happen would it matter if it did or didn't occur? Maybe the answer to that will never be revealed..

   I started the day off with a somewhat high note, I thought I would try to become more active and start to care or the body I currently resided in. I changed out into some clothes I could easily move in all black shirt, shorts, socks, and of course the essential shoes. Today was the day I would change and fix this body I lived in making it seem somewhat better it was already 5"7 and 130lbs short and fat in my opinion with curly soft dark brown hair, assisted by greenish-brown eyes, after that body check I quickly went outside and ran mile after mile on my road stretching and doing jumping jacks making sure I wouldn't get sore. After that I took a long warm shower cleaning everything soaping trying to smell and look clean, then I cooked myself something healthy to eat.

   Why did I care for that body, why feed it, why keep it in-shape? I didn't know I might lose it..

   Later that day I wanted to get out of work so I was able to go to the library and get books to read, my ulterior motive was to be able to make the brain I own smarter and more efficient by obtaining as much knowledge as I could. So the one labelled as Mother and Sister drove me there in the shiny van. Driving toward the place that maybe I wasn't supposed to enter. Should I have stayed in the car? Or maybe should I have not gone in the first place I don't know how to look at this problem.

What was the point of this, Why did I even want to go again, Why was I imbued in knowledge? I had no idea this would happen...

   Even so, I entered the large library residing in my district. Not thinking it might be the last place or was it the last place I'd see who knows. Mother went over to the chair by the stairwell too tired from today's work load she had to do, in a way I kind of felt bad for her but I knew she brought it upon herself and I shouldn't pity her too much I need to bring her up more. So I went with Sister, to help her find motion pictures to watch and help her later that night because she was transferring to a new school and I thought it was time to stop picking fights and making fun of her and start to console her and assist her in every way I could it was time to become the person she needed in her life.

   Was I stupid to change my opinion, Do they really need my help, Was the change what brought this encounter? Was this meeting un-avoidable....

   After helping Sister, I was scared and anxious too leave the outside world was full of humans and I was scared of what they might think of me, but I know Sister wouldn't come with me no matter how scared I was. I took my courage faking my expression looking mean and un-approachable walking to the "Teen Zone" where the books I wanted were. I walked all the way to the back feeling relief pulsing through my body no one was there but I still felt wary, and it was because when I got to the back it happened. The fateful encounter happened...

   Why did I leave Sister, What was the point, I didn't need the books did I? Would this happen even so....

   I met him, he was big and by big I mean tall 6"2 and of course a little weight just enough to support his body he didn't look fat at all he had big hands that I could see from reaching for books, his hair was short but a light brown he had great eyes and a nice face. I was scared because he was human of course but I felt strangely okay with him there. I think he said excuse and he backed off a bit which was a nice gesture but I was still a little wary and suspicious I kneeled down looking for the books I wanted only to hear him gasp.. I looked up to see some of the books from the large stack he was carrying about 20 but only 5 fell I cringed but lifted my hand to catch them. Only to catch them with him together we both got the books before the hit me. He of course apologized a lot, his face was somewhat red and he seemed flustered intent of gaining my forgiveness.

   Why was he sorry?, It was probably on purpose, He was going to lie I think.....

   I accepted his apology faking a smile, he seemed depressed at the thought of "accidentally" dropping some of books on me. I asked him why he had so many he told me he loved to read especially the type of stories I was into so I thought this might be a good oppertunity to get my books I asked him about the books I wanted and his face gleamed with delight. He picked up the ones he dropped and showed me them, they were what I wanted he offered me them I declined actually feeling a bit sorry for him I don't know how or why. He asked me for my name I told him for some reason he seemed to be excited of the thought of learning my name and using a few times he started blushing looking at me. He once again offered me the books using my name casually the nerve of him. I again declined him, saying he deserved them more since I watched some of the animation of the books and since he had no, knowledge of him I thought it was better of him to keep them. Saying this he blushed a darker red I was confused why he was doing that. At the time a voice over the mic appeared telling the library would soon close. I left him or so I thought, I tripped and fell on my face only to have myself lifted up softly by his arms he looked so concern he dropped his books for me. I thanked him this time dearly I actually thought he was a good person at heart and he made me a little happy knowing that he just knew my name and wanted to help.

   Maybe I was confused at the time, Maybe he was just being a good samaritan, He didn't like me of course.. right?......

   After leaving him he seemed so sad at the thought of departure, I went over to Mother telling her Sister was checking out her motion pictures, she seemed so tired but even so I had to wake her. We all started to walk out of the District Library only to hear my name being called by Him, he was yelling something I didn't hear but then I heard something it was something so loud it was like an animal screeching loud in pain it stung my ears I don't recall what the thing was but the screeching sound and the faces of Mother, Sister, and...Him all surprised and shocked I felt like my head was spinning out of control....

   I don't remember after that time, I think that "Fateful Encounter" was an experience the last experience.
   It of course was a day like any other I guess, all day it seemed to pour and shower in rain. At first it seemed the gray clouds would never part, and never cease to it's crying. But it was on this poor day that I had an encounter that seemed fateful to the extent of being questionable was this encounter mean't to happen would it matter if it did or didn't occur? Maybe the answer to that will never be revealed..

   I started the day off with a somewhat high note, I thought I would try to become more active and start to care or the body I currently resided in. I changed out into some clothes I could easily move in all black shirt, shorts, socks, and of course the essential shoes. Today was the day I would change and fix this body I lived in making it seem somewhat better it was already 5"7 and 130lbs short and fat in my opinion with curly soft dark brown hair, assisted by greenish-brown eyes, after that body check I quickly went outside and ran mile after mile on my road stretching and doing jumping jacks making sure I wouldn't get sore. After that I took a long warm shower cleaning everything soaping trying to smell and look clean, then I cooked myself something healthy to eat.

   Why did I care for that body, why feed it, why keep it in-shape? I didn't know I might lose it..

   Later that day I wanted to get out of work so I was able to go to the library and get books to read, my ulterior motive was to be able to make the brain I own smarter and more efficient by obtaining as much knowledge as I could. So the one labelled as Mother and Sister drove me there in the shiny van. Driving toward the place that maybe I wasn't supposed to enter. Should I have stayed in the car? Or maybe should I have not gone in the first place I don't know how to look at this problem.

What was the point of this, Why did I even want to go again, Why was I imbued in knowledge? I had no idea this would happen...

   Even so, I entered the large library residing in my district. Not thinking it might be the last place or was it the last place I'd see who knows. Mother went over to the chair by the stairwell too tired from today's work load she had to do, in a way I kind of felt bad for her but I knew she brought it upon herself and I shouldn't pity her too much I need to bring her up more. So I went with Sister, to help her find motion pictures to watch and help her later that night because she was transferring to a new school and I thought it was time to stop picking fights and making fun of her and start to console her and assist her in every way I could it was time to become the person she needed in her life.

   Was I stupid to change my opinion, Do they really need my help, Was the change what brought this encounter? Was this meeting un-avoidable....

   After helping Sister, I was scared and anxious too leave the outside world was full of humans and I was scared of what they might think of me, but I know Sister wouldn't come with me no matter how scared I was. I took my courage faking my expression looking mean and un-approachable walking to the "Teen Zone" where the books I wanted were. I walked all the way to the back feeling relief pulsing through my body no one was there but I still felt wary, and it was because when I got to the back it happened. The fateful encounter happened...

   Why did I leave Sister, What was the point, I didn't need the books did I? Would this happen even so....

   I met him, he was big and by big I mean tall 6"2 and of course a little weight just enough to support his body he didn't look fat at all he had big hands that I could see from reaching for books, his hair was short but a light brown he had great eyes and a nice face. I was scared because he was human of course but I felt strangely okay with him there. I think he said excuse and he backed off a bit which was a nice gesture but I was still a little wary and suspicious I kneeled down looking for the books I wanted only to hear him gasp.. I looked up to see some of the books from the large stack he was carrying about 20 but only 5 fell I cringed but lifted my hand to catch them. Only to catch them with him together we both got the books before the hit me. He of course apologized a lot, his face was somewhat red and he seemed flustered intent of gaining my forgiveness.

   Why was he sorry?, It was probably on purpose, He was going to lie I think.....

   I accepted his apology faking a smile, he seemed depressed at the thought of "accidentally" dropping some of books on me. I asked him why he had so many he told me he loved to read especially the type of stories I was into so I thought this might be a good oppertunity to get my books I asked him about the books I wanted and his face gleamed with delight. He picked up the ones he dropped and showed me them, they were what I wanted he offered me them I declined actually feeling a bit sorry for him I don't know how or why. He asked me for my name I told him for some reason he seemed to be excited of the thought of learning my name and using a few times he started blushing looking at me. He once again offered me the books using my name casually the nerve of him. I again declined him, saying he deserved them more since I watched some of the animation of the books and since he had no, knowledge of him I thought it was better of him to keep them. Saying this he blushed a darker red I was confused why he was doing that. At the time a voice over the mic appeared telling the library would soon close. I left him or so I thought, I tripped and fell on my face only to have myself lifted up softly by his arms he looked so concern he dropped his books for me. I thanked him this time dearly I actually thought he was a good person at heart and he made me a little happy knowing that he just knew my name and wanted to help.

   Maybe I was confused at the time, Maybe he was just being a good samaritan, He didn't like me of course.. right?......

   After leaving him he seemed so sad at the thought of departure, I went over to Mother telling her Sister was checking out her motion pictures, she seemed so tired but even so I had to wake her. We all started to walk out of the District Library only to hear my name being called by Him, he was yelling something I didn't hear but then I heard something it was something so loud it was like an animal screeching loud in pain it stung my ears I don't recall what the thing was but the screeching sound and the faces of Mother, Sister, and...Him all surprised and shocked I felt like my head was spinning out of control....

   I don't remember after that time, I think that "Fateful Encounter" was an experience the last experience.
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Good job! I enjoyed reading this at work with my cup of coffee. I haven't read in a while but this got me interested in reading some fan fiction. I sue to read a lot in Wattpad. Very well written and descriptive, really helps to visualize it. I wonder what the noise was and she's so clumsy lol
Good job! I enjoyed reading this at work with my cup of coffee. I haven't read in a while but this got me interested in reading some fan fiction. I sue to read a lot in Wattpad. Very well written and descriptive, really helps to visualize it. I wonder what the noise was and she's so clumsy lol
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jlove92 : Thank you, I'm glad you liked it : D this was kind of a rant because writing stories of stuff that happened to me is how I vent. And the gender of the character isn't really mentioned because it is for the reader to decide how they want it to be. I made the character resemble me and I described everything that I did that day and how it went for me. But It's not about me it's about you the reader to put yourself in the place of my character hence why I give them no name if I did I would use my name but then it wouldn't be so interactive. 

But I'm glad you liked it regardless, I'm actually happy with the out-come of this though it's mean't to be a pretty vague story, but with enough description that it's not confusing, also thank you for the feed-back as well I thought I was being a little to much with the descriptions but it seemed you were okay with that  

I don't like to give out too much information but the noise in the end is for the reader to encode what the fate was.
jlove92 : Thank you, I'm glad you liked it : D this was kind of a rant because writing stories of stuff that happened to me is how I vent. And the gender of the character isn't really mentioned because it is for the reader to decide how they want it to be. I made the character resemble me and I described everything that I did that day and how it went for me. But It's not about me it's about you the reader to put yourself in the place of my character hence why I give them no name if I did I would use my name but then it wouldn't be so interactive. 

But I'm glad you liked it regardless, I'm actually happy with the out-come of this though it's mean't to be a pretty vague story, but with enough description that it's not confusing, also thank you for the feed-back as well I thought I was being a little to much with the descriptions but it seemed you were okay with that  

I don't like to give out too much information but the noise in the end is for the reader to encode what the fate was.
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