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My first poem on Vizzed.
My first attempt to look creative :P
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My first poem on Vizzed.

 

05-14-14 12:12 PM
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I've seen many members here writing stories and poems, but I've never done anything of this kind, although my family says I'm good at poems, so I decided to make a forum since I'm normally not a creative member, I might as well give it a try. Here it is:

This is my first poem, probably not the best.
But if you like, then it surely won't be my last!
I really don't know what to put here,
but I make sure it rhymes my dear.
Writing poems is really cool and nice to do,
and I hope that this inspires others to write them too.
Gee, I'm doing good so far right?
If I keep this up, I'll be finished when it's night.
This is the ninth rule, the next will be tenth,
so I decide to stop it now, this is the end.

Well, that's my poem! I didn't know a good subject but if you like it and have a good subject for me, then please tell me!
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Wow.....not bad. You did really good. I enjoyed it. ^-^
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Eniitan : Thank you! I was inspired by your poems so I wanted to write one too
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This is really good bro. Eniitan does make good poems. I used some of Her poetry to inspire a couple of my own poems. Your on your way my friend. Keep it up. One day you might be better then your big brother :-P 
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Hahaha cool I'm not so good at poems but I kind of am at stories. I have madea lot of stories on vizzed. I really enjoyed the poem keep writing them.
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generalspleen : Thanks! I'll try to keep up with you

imamonster : Thanks, I'm happy to see you like it as well. I'll read some of your stories once
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Thought it was a great start ,I liked it very much.
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rebelyell : Thank you, the beginning is a nice touch to the poem in my opinion
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