Let's see... First of all, I want to start by saying that 'Shinx' must seriously be repaired, I though I caught  an electric Pokémon, guess what, it wasn't at all, it was a Totodile, his skills are equal to his, and when he finally evolves to Luxio, the croconow sprite actually appears in the Pokémon statue menu. Anyways, just like that one, there are a lot of map glitches and npc glitches as well..., I've played for like 2-3 hours now, and I've seen more than 15 map glitches, and more than 3 npc glitches. Really, the one who made this game should really fix those, I bet there aren't as much as I think they are in the entire game, so I suppose it won't take him a lot of time just to actually 'Finish' his game. Other than that, I found this game very interesting, really smart showing mewtwo at the start of the game to give us that motivation to defeat the Elite Four. Really sweet and vivid map, new dungeons and events, really sweet. 

Generally, I prefer that users make reviews for a game after they have completed the game instead of playing it for a few hours. After beating it, kind of play around some more so you can come up with things to really discuss. I felt this was more of a list of glitches and development holes. That is all fine, but I would like to hear more about all the different aspects of the game. These are really tips more than anything.

With those said, I see this is your first post and I think you are off to a pretty good start. I liked that you talked a little about how the story starts out without giving us too much information so it doesn't spoil it. Overall, I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up

Pokemon Dark Cry is pretty cool. I enjoy a good hack, this is a pretty good example. I enjoyed it, I'd play it any day, any time.