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So You Sang To Me
This is my first tester of forum posting - I hope you enjoy it. Every poem I've published, have a meaning, maybe several - what I'd love would be responses, interpretations - I love what the public have to say! So do not be afraid to comment
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01-10-12 06:40 PM
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Heartsick
Rather than a soft little sad poem, I present you Heartsick, almost with a 'sociopathic Romanticism' [not just love, but the qualities of nature and the Byronic hero, for example.]
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01-11-12 03:33 PM
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Kardia
A classic love poem. Touching, less convoluted, not even violent. Try not to cry!
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Dear Fading Memory / Goodbye; A Moronic Poem
Warning: This is an epic poem - please be prepared for an adventure!
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Just Smile
One of those situations where someone says 'smile' when all else goes wrong.
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01-15-12 08:59 AM
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Passion
Sorry I haven't posted anything, due to the SOPA and uni stuff, but here is a lovely, short, sweet poem. Hope you enjoy!
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01-27-12 02:31 AM
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Have You Ever?
This poem was written on the dot of the tumult. Bear with me if it seems a little ornate and convoluted! Enjoy!
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01-25-12 01:58 PM
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Theodore
WARNING: [M Rating] This poem contains disturbing, violent behaviours, some strong language and some sexual references. Read at your own risk!
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Chapter 4: Lullaby
I actually wrote this from listening to 'River Flows With You', so for the optimised rhythm, find a piano cover to the song and read the poem. Enjoy!
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Chapter 5: Porcelain Puppet
Now, the ocean has turned - what has happened to the Paramour?
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Chapter 7: Unwritten Compassion
A Valentine's Special (d'aww)....with a twist. Can you find it?
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Beautiful Stranger
Quite a simple poem in the eyes of someone I've met, describing a - what they call - a beautiful stranger. Undoubtedly quite touching.
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02-24-12 11:02 PM
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Chapter 8: False Paramours
I think the poem pretty much defines itself about those 'heavily in love'
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Chapter 9: Absolute
Absolute: not diminished, not total. OR complete, total, sheer. This goes out to my love.
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Chapter 10: Heavy Rain
There are two narrative voices in here. So if you get confused, it's all explained
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Chapter 12: Moronic
After an epic battle, an angry goodbye poem is sent back to 'Fading Memory'
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Chapter 13: The Letter
Moving away from the other bad memory, the paramour writes to their lover... after ending. A world of tumult... yet simple.
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Chapter 14: Memory
I, personally, loved writing this poem. You can see the shift of tone, and in this poem, passion thrives within each line. This is the end of the paramour's journey - sadly!
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Yours, Truthfully
A poem in response to another poem... Dealing with a situation where you try and help someone, and end up losing a friendship, being accused of lying
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02-28-12 10:48 PM
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Idiocy
It's more of a prose, than a poem. The prologue to my 'Vo'xio Dain Me'aa Tente' collection...
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