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My Imagination - Chapter 3: Sweet revenge

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Name: Jake

Gender: Male

Look: Black, short hair, white skin color, wearing a blue hoody and grey jeans

Age: 17

Comes from: USA

Crush: X

Likes: Doing homework when needed, to make more time for games

Dislikes: School

Name: Zoe

Gender: Female

Look: Black, long hair, white skin color, wearing a pink skirt and a black hoody

Age: 16

Comes from: USA

Crush: Jake

Likes: Jake's handwriting, making art of the nature

Dislikes: Bullying, insulting other people

Name: Jess

Gender: Female

Look: Black, really long hair, black skin color, wearing a cap, a green tied shirt and blue jeans

Age: 17

Comes from: USA

Crush: Mike

Likes: Staying cool with her friends, and playing tennis.

Dislikes: Eating much, as she wants to keep her body healthy. Hates it to be angry, as she has psychical problems with anger.

Name: Philip

Gender: Male

Look: Black, slightly short hair (which is dyed red), tinted skin color, wearing an army t-shirt and pants with army print.

Age: 18

Comes from: France

Crush: Jess

Likes: The USA army, and Jess' brave feelings for everything she does.

Dislikes: His father and school.

Name: Mike

Gender: Male

Look: Blonde, long hair, white skin color, wearing a yellow hoody and grey pants, with a lot of chains on it.

Age: 16

Comes from: USA

Crush: Jess

Likes: Death Metal music, and being alone

Dislikes: Being together with someone, except with Rachel, his sister

Name: Rachel

Gender: Female

Look: Blonde, really long hair, white skin color, wearing a sleeveless shirt in pink, a brown skirt and leather boots. Also has a huge ribbon in her hair.

Age: 18

Comes from: USA

Crush: X

Likes: Playing songs and making covers on her guitar secretly. In public, she makes jokes about everything. She likes being with her brother Mike as well.

Dislikes: Helping her handicapped mother constantly, so that she has no time for fun things to do.

Name: Frank Hudson (Mr. Hudson)

Gender: Male

Look: Grey, slightly short hair, white skin color, wearing a spencer, with green pants. Also, he's a bit on the old side.

Age: 57 (told you he is a bit on the old side!)

Comes from: USA

Crush: No one at school.

Likes: Listening to music from early 90's.

Dislikes: having to slap another student again. He hates that.

Name: Kelly McKinsey (Mrs. McKinsey)

Gender: Female

Look: Brown, really long hair, brown skin color, wearing a pink, sleeveless shirt with heartprint on it and wearing blue jeans, with a few chains on it.

Age: 23

Comes from: USA

Crush: No one at school

Likes: Helping out Mr Hudson's students when they're in trouble. Her best friend on school is Zoe.

Dislikes: Students who think they're cool if they throw a paper plane towards the teacher.

Note: None of these characters are in an 'important - not important' order, so the main character is hard to see here.

Chapter 3: Sweet revenge

On the Treehouse Street, on the same place as Zoe got kidnapped, was Jess waiting for the bus to come.

Jess: "Man, when will that freaking bus come?"

She looked at her watch. 20:45 PM. It was pretty late, and she asked Rachel to learn some techniques on a guitar at Rachel's home.

Jess: "Ah. Is that... No, never mind..."

She saw a red, old car coming her way. It was going pretty fast.

Jess: "Ugh... Some people hate going slow..."

But the car dashed towards the place Jess was standing. In fact, it wanted to hurt Jess.

Jess: "What the..."

The car touched the busstop, while Jess jumped away, on the road. The car destroyed the busstop, made from steel pillars, and glass panes with a tiny roof on it. Jess fell to the ground, safe and well.

Jess: "Ow... Hey, you stupid weirdo! Watch it, will you?"

???: "Did i hit you?"

Jess: "Yes, of course you did! Stop drinking next time or something!"

The person behind the car grabbed something in the dark car, and pointed it out of the broken window of his car. It was... a gun.

Jess: "Eek! W-what..."

She had her hands upward.

???: "No need to do that... Heh heh..."

Jess: "Hey... I recognize your voice... You're... *gasp*"

???: "No, i'm not gasp... I'm Harold Millerton. And you?"

Jess: "I'm not gonna tell who i am to a kidnapper."

Harold: "Fine. Then i'll ride over you, and this time i will succeed."

He pulled over the trigger from his gun while he pointed at Jess' feet.

BWAMM!!!

Jess: "Aaaah! Ow! Ow!"

She got being shot in her left foot.

Harold: "Now stay there."

???: "No! Not Jess!"

Harold: "Ugh..."

It was Eric who ran towards the car with a wooden plank in his hands, and knocked out Harold. Well, he wanted to knock him out, put his gun fell out of his hands when he got slapped with the plank.

Harold: "Argh!"

Jess crawled towards the gun, grabbed it... and pointed at Eric.

Eric: "Jess! What..."

Jess: "Now is the perfect time to take my revenge to you."

Eric: "No, Jess! Please... Don't... I saved you..."

Jess: "Too late. You shouldn't have drawn a heart with Mike's name in it next to mine with a marker."

She pulled the trigger when she aimed for Eric's head, who was standing at the other side of Harold's car.

BWAMM!!!

She shot down Eric, who fell to the ground. The bullet seemed to go too far in his head, and he died immediately. Jess threw the gun on the ground, next to Eric's head. Then she walked away, back to her home.

Later on, when she came back home...

Jess' mom Sarah was making dinner and Jess' father Jackson was reading a book. Then Jess came home at last.

Sarah: "Jessie Alana Grealings! Where the (***) did you came from around this time?!"

Jackson: "Honey... She might have been stuck with the busses at Treehouse street..."

Sarah: "Jackson, this is not a good time to act funny. Jess, look at me!"

Jess just came in and still was a bit angry, but had to hide it as she just committed a murder. She looked away from her mother, who was standing in front of Jess.

Sarah: "Jess, look at me. Where the (****) did you came from?"

Jess: "From a busstop... Now leave me alo-..."

Jackson went up.

Jackson: "Jess, you don't talk like that to your mother. Give us the answer to her question."

Jess: "Okay... I... ate a hotdog and spilled some ketchup over my shirt. And i was staying over with some friends, and once i got to the busstop, that kidnapper Harold almost went over me with a car."

Sarah: "That's the worst lie i ever heard! Harold is already arrested!"

Jackson: "You're wrong, honey. Harold was hiding for the police in his 'base', but i don't know where that is either."

Sarah: "Well then... If he indeed ran over you, go upstairs now! I don't want you to come down until i say so!"

Jess: "But, mom..."

Sarah: "Jess, go to your room!"

Jess: "UGH, okay..."

Jess went to her room at last, she stomped on the staircase as if an elephant went up on a staircase, and then Jess slammed her door hardly.

Sarah: "Wait a minute... Doesn't Jess have her phone on her room? And how did she have a wound in her foot?"

Jackson: "And doesn't she wants to be healthy? And doesn't Jess dislike hotdogs?"

Sarah: "Ugh... she lied to us again."

Jackson ran upstairs and went to Jess' room, which was suprisingly enough unlocked. Jess would lock her room normally. Jess sat on her bed and looked up towards her father with a pretty upset face.

Jackson: "YOU (****), WHY DO YOU LIE TO YOUR MOTHER!!? GIVE ME A VALID REASON NOW! OR I WILL (****) CALL THE POLICE TO SAY YOU ARE FOUND ALREADY!!!"

Jess: "W-what?"

Sarah (who was standing in the doorway): "We said to the police you were missing 17 minutes before you came!"

Jackson: "Do NOT do this again! Right now, your behavior is disgusting! And your phone will be taken from you for a month!"

Jackson went out of the door and slammed it too. Then Jess left a tear and started to cry. There weren't any friends of her nearby anyway.

The next day...

Zoe, Jake, Mike and Philip were talking to each other on the schoolyard and Will came in to ask them something. It was 12 minutes before the school started, and as always, Will took an eye on the students.

Will: "Guys, can i ask you something?"

Zoe: "Sure."

Mike: "Why not?"

Will: "Well, Jess was being upset yesterday and her parents told us she wouldn't come to school today and tomorrow. Do you guys know why she's not coming on two specific days?

Mike: "Uh..."

Jake: "That's a good one..."

Zoe: "I saw her at a busstop, and tried to find my watch which fell, then i found it and heard two loud noises. I looked and i saw no one, just a red old car standing inside the bus shelter."

Will: "And when did you saw her?"

Zoe: "I don't know, i found my watch on 20:58 PM, it appeared."

Will: "Hmm... A red old car?"

Zoe: "Yes. It had no mirrors on the sides and tape on one tire"

Philip: "Hey! I know someone who have a red old car with that!"

Will: "Who?"

Philip: "It was... Oh no..."

Zoe: "What is it, Philip?"

Philip: "It was the kidnapper Harold who have that car!"

Jake: "I haven't seen Eric, by the way..."

Mike: "Oh, never mind him. That creep may be hanging around again.

Will: "Guys..."

Mike: "Uh?"

Zoe: "Yeah?"

Will sighed and said: "Eric is being killed..."

Everyone: "WHAT!?!"

Zoe started to get nervous, as she was thinking the killer could be anyone. I could be Mike, it could be Philip, it could be Rachel... Anyone.

Once the school day was over, Mike went home and saw Jess sitting on a bench in the park Mike went through. Mike saw Jess is pretty sad, upset and she looked like she didn't knew what to do.

Mike: "Hey, Jess!"

Jess: "Oh... Hey..."

Mike sat next to her.

Mike: "What's wrong? You look down."

Jess: "Yes, i am SO pissed right now!!! My (****) parents grounded me, took my phone and said to the police i was missing in first place!!! *sniff* And now i got an even BIGGER problem!"

Mike: "Like what?"

Jess looked at Mike. Mike could see her eyes being as clear as the sky.

Jess: "Will you promise you don't say this to anyone?"

Mike: "Uhm..."

He started to blush, because he thought Jess was confessing her love to Mike.

Mike: "Sure... I-i'll promise"

Jess: "I... *sigh* killed Eric..."

Mike's heart had a shock. He stopped blushing

Mike: "What? Y-you... killed him?!"

Jess started to cry really hard, while she hugged Mike tight.

Jess: "YES!! *sob* And now i don't know what to do!!!"

Mike started to blush again.

Mike: "Eh..."

He laid his arm over Jess, who was laying on Mike's shoulder.

Mike: "You should try to report this to the police, maybe you will get a lower punishment?"

Jess: "That's it?"

Mike: "Jess, i didn't..."

Jess went up again and went off the bench.

Jess: "THAT'S your best advice?"

Mike went up too and said: "Look, i just don't want you to be sentenced to life time in prison. I don't want you in prison at all. And sure, i didn't like Eric either, but we don't need to look at the past."

Jess: "To what, then?"

Mike: "To the future, Jess. We need to look at the future, OUR future! If you report this to the police, you may be saved a bit. If you don't, well..."

He was quiet.

Mike: "I just want you to be save, Jess."

Jess: "Mike..."

Mike: "Yes?..."

Jess: "Thank you..."

She moved her face closer to Mike's face, and she closed her eyes slowly. Mike did so too, and did the same a bit. Before you would think it, they were kissing and were holding each other's hands. Mike seemed to like it, Jess just did it because... well... she liked it too.

1 hour later...

Rachel: "Mom, please. Can i PLEASE go upstairs now?"

Rachel had to help her mother, Julie, again. Julie had a car accident when Rachel was 3 and Mike was 1. Julie's legs and back are now disabled, so she needs help from her kids. But if they indeed help her?

Julie: "Yes... You may. Thank you for getting that suitcase upstairs!"

Rachel: "It's okay. See you."

Julie: "Bye."

Rachel went upstairs, going to her room to play some songs on her guitar. She loved doing that, and especially for a person who wanted to let Rachel make one for them. This person was also someone from her school. Rachel was about to pick up her guitar, until...

Mike opened the front door and said: "I'm so happy, la la dee!!"

Julie was watching TV and payed no attention to Mike.

Mike closed the door when he was inside and went to his mother.

Mike: "Hey, Julie!"

Julie: "Mike, i'm still your mother, so call me 'mom'."

Mike: "Sorry, mom. But i'm so... happy."

Julie: "Because?"

Mike told Julie everything. He even mentioned Jess' killing actions by accident.

Julie: "Jess? That cool girl from Oakwood Lane? She killed someone?"

Mike: "Yes! Wait... Wha? Eh... No, no!"

Julie grabbed the phone which laid next to her and called 911.

Julie: "I'm sorry, Mike. But i can't let you be in such danger anymore."

Mike: "Mom! No! Please!"

Julie: "Ah hello, with Julie van Houten, i would like to report a killer who seemed to have killed someone. Yes, my son was with her."

Mike: "Oh god... *sigh* What have i done?"

Julie: "Mike van Houten. Yes, that's my son's name, and he was with a friend named Jess Grealings. And according to my son, Jess killed a friend from school."

Mike opened the door and dashed to Jess' house. It took a while, as Jess wasn't far from Mike, but neither she was close to his house.

At last, he reached Jess' house, and ringed the doorbell. Sarah opened it.

Sarah: "Oh. Mike, wasn't it?"

Mike: "Uh... yes. Wait, you expected me?"

Mike was surprised Jess' mother expected him.

Sarah: "Yes, as we saw you from a distance dashing to our house. What's the matter?"

Mike: "Eh... I had to promise Jess not to tell this, but..."

He told everything to Sarah.

Sarah: "What?! Jess?!"

Jess (from her room): "What is it?"

Jess opened her door and saw Mike. She dashed to Mike to hug him.

Jess: "Hey, Mike!"

Mike: "eh..."

Jess released Mike and was concerned about Mike. Did he tell his family? Did he just forget our promise? That's what Jess thought.

Mike: "I... accidentally told my mother about... you know... the... eh... uh..."

He was scared that Jess was going to be angry on Mike.

Mike continued: "...that you killed Eric..."

Jess: "......what?"

Jess went from curiosity to anger.
Jess: "YOU TOLD WHAT!?"

Jess slapped Mike really hard, and Sarah stopped Jess when she wanted to punch Mike more times.

Jess: "YOU (****)!!! You promised to keep it a secret!! *sniff* Was that all A LIE!? A (****) LIE!?!"

Mike: "Ow..."

Jackson came, because he heard the screaming of Jess.

Jackson: "What is going on here?!"

Jess was crying, while Sarah held her arm really tight with an angry face.

Sarah: "Jess killed Eric, and then knocked out Mike."

Mike: "I'm okay... Ow."

He went up.

Mike: "Should i go now?"

Suddenly, a police car stopped in front of Jess' house, and the friendly cop, Ted, came out. This time, he's not so friendly. Another cop came out of the car, and the two came to the house.

Ted: "Are you Sarah Grealings?"

Sarah: "Yes, that's me. But we didn't call. But our daughter here killed a schoolmate of hers!"

Ted: "Is that true, young lady?"

Ted looked at Jess with a mad face.

Jess was crying a lot.

Jess: "*sob* Yes... *sniff*"

Ted grabbed Jess' arms and held them behind her and they went to the police car, of which the door was opened by the other cop. That cop closed the door and said, when he went in the car, that Ted may drive now.

Jess was still crying, meanwhile. And opened her eyes. She looked left, outside a window which was too strong to destroy. But then, a voice was coughing on the other side of Jess. Jess was scared, and looked at the other side. It was, believe it or not, Harold. That strange weirdo who got to regrets for his crimes. He seemed to look at Jess a while, then looked outside of his window on his side. Jess was thinking: What? How did Harold made it alive? I thought Eric knocked him out?

Jess suddenly thought of her crimes. The time she killed Eric. The time her easy life would be over. She started crying once again.

Jess: "*sob* Why did i have to do this... *sniff*"

Harold: "Did what?"

Jess got scared when Harold talked. He had a deep voice, and pretty long hair. It was pretty weird to see his face clearly: He had a grey eyes and a mustache. And his hair color was dark brown.

Jess: "Uh... I... killed someone..."

Harold heard that. He started to laugh hardly. His laugh scared Jess a bit.

Harold: "Haha! Young lady, it's not a good thing to be in prison... I can tell. Look, if i could, i would escape directly. But i rammed that busstop and got knocked out. But by who?"

Jess: "Uh... I... killed that person."

Harold: "Oh really?"

Jess: "Yes... *sigh* and i regret it..."

Harold: "Heh heh... You seem to have a huge future in prison coming up... I'll see if i will help you or not... For now, i keep my mouth shut."

Jess turned her head away from Harold. She looked outside her window. Only trees and houses. Well, a bit of that, as there were iron bars between Jess and the window. Jess' future was hopeless.

Meanwhile...

Zoe and Jake were at Jess' home, because they saw Sarah crying. Mostly if Sarah cried, it was about Jess.

Zoe: "And... You're 100 percent sure this happened?"

Jackson: "Zoe, if Sarah lied, she would laugh after that."

Jake: "Is she going to be free?"

Jackson: "Who? Jess?"

Jake: "Yes."

Jackson: "No, not at all. She isn't welcome here anymore. Well, if she escapes from prison."

Zoe: "Wait... I heard two loud gun shots when it happened, so maybe HAROLD killed Eric and then laid the gun next to his head! I mean, Philip saw his car!"

Jake: "Then there's still hope for her!"

The two went up and went home... Well, Zoe's home. They were about to make a plan and a reconstruction from what happened.

To be continued...

Guest in next chapter: Ryan Grant ( Linkums : )

Ryan: "Hi, i'm Ryan! I'm not the tallest, but i believe that i'll be the biggest of the school soon!"

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Didn't expect half of that.

Also Jess' family is extremely dysfunctional, poor girl. She has her own issues though, so...

Also, for your next chapter, please try to remember to disable your layout.

Didn't expect half of that.

Also Jess' family is extremely dysfunctional, poor girl. She has her own issues though, so...

Also, for your next chapter, please try to remember to disable your layout.

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