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Anyone want to take a listen and give me thoughts?

 

10-31-15 07:30 PM
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So I used to make a lot of Electronic songs in the past and then I just kind of stopped. I never really had any time to do it anymore. The other day however I had a bit of time to try again and I ended up writing a complete song. It's kind of short though.

I was just hoping that some of you could take a listen and give me feedback about what you like about it and what you don't like and maybe even give me some things I can improve on. It would be awesome! Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/user-664509364/ghosts

EDIT: I also thought I should mention that when you listen it would be a good idea to wear headphones or ear buds. It's harder to hear everything if it's through computer speakers or something I find.
So I used to make a lot of Electronic songs in the past and then I just kind of stopped. I never really had any time to do it anymore. The other day however I had a bit of time to try again and I ended up writing a complete song. It's kind of short though.

I was just hoping that some of you could take a listen and give me feedback about what you like about it and what you don't like and maybe even give me some things I can improve on. It would be awesome! Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/user-664509364/ghosts

EDIT: I also thought I should mention that when you listen it would be a good idea to wear headphones or ear buds. It's harder to hear everything if it's through computer speakers or something I find.
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(edited by MoblinGardens on 10-31-15 07:32 PM)    

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MoblinGardens : It definitely would have benefited from a wider range of instruments, but overall I found it rather interesting.
You could have included more variations, but the repetitions were different

enough to keep it from becoming monotonous at the very least.  I feel

that beginning at 0:56, it gets kind of cluttered, but the next section

is better.  I like how the song moves up into a higher register at 1:23.


Overall, a pretty good track.

Sorry for all the edits, I'm having some issues with my text box.
MoblinGardens : It definitely would have benefited from a wider range of instruments, but overall I found it rather interesting.
You could have included more variations, but the repetitions were different

enough to keep it from becoming monotonous at the very least.  I feel

that beginning at 0:56, it gets kind of cluttered, but the next section

is better.  I like how the song moves up into a higher register at 1:23.


Overall, a pretty good track.

Sorry for all the edits, I'm having some issues with my text box.
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(edited by Hidden Phantom on 11-03-15 04:13 PM)    

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Hidden Phantom : Thanks! Yeah, I didn't spend all that much time on it. I would have liked to add more instruments, I might go back to it later on and add in new things and make it change up more often. But thanks for your feedback, I'll take it into consideration if I decide to make another one!
Hidden Phantom : Thanks! Yeah, I didn't spend all that much time on it. I would have liked to add more instruments, I might go back to it later on and add in new things and make it change up more often. But thanks for your feedback, I'll take it into consideration if I decide to make another one!
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I love finding random junk on Soundcloud.

It was pretty good and also made me think of some of the Pokemon battle themes but at the same time it was a bit strange. I think you could add an extra piece or two that's totally different to make it even better. Overall it was pretty good, I didn't need to fall asleep so that's a plus.
I love finding random junk on Soundcloud.

It was pretty good and also made me think of some of the Pokemon battle themes but at the same time it was a bit strange. I think you could add an extra piece or two that's totally different to make it even better. Overall it was pretty good, I didn't need to fall asleep so that's a plus.
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MoblinGardens : That was pretty good. I kinda laughed at the end though. It seem like at 1:20 onward the quality gets higher.

It got a bit repetitive, and Hidden Phantom already told you about instruments. But it was pretty good. I look forward to anything you make in the future.

MoblinGardens : That was pretty good. I kinda laughed at the end though. It seem like at 1:20 onward the quality gets higher.

It got a bit repetitive, and Hidden Phantom already told you about instruments. But it was pretty good. I look forward to anything you make in the future.
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I'm only 30 seconds in and I already like it. I especially like the beat that the song starts with. It's great.

I'm a big fan of stuff like this. I could listen to it for a lot longer than most people probably could. I like music that is pretty upbeat like this.

I thought it was great.
I'm only 30 seconds in and I already like it. I especially like the beat that the song starts with. It's great.

I'm a big fan of stuff like this. I could listen to it for a lot longer than most people probably could. I like music that is pretty upbeat like this.

I thought it was great.
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It's not bad, I really like the bassline, and the beat is pretty good. One thing I'm not a fan of, though, is the 'oh' sound used for the melody, it just sounds off.  I think using something like a piano would work better and sound a lot darker. But overall, it's still fun to listen to!
It's not bad, I really like the bassline, and the beat is pretty good. One thing I'm not a fan of, though, is the 'oh' sound used for the melody, it just sounds off.  I think using something like a piano would work better and sound a lot darker. But overall, it's still fun to listen to!
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MoblinGardens : I thought it was nice. It did get a little repetitive, but other than that it was good. I especially liked the voice sampling. Keep up the good work!
MoblinGardens : I thought it was nice. It did get a little repetitive, but other than that it was good. I especially liked the voice sampling. Keep up the good work!
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