And to go along with what has already been said:
When you divide things into categories, pretend that you are trying to get a friend to play the game, and they are asking questions. So ask yourself some questions.
I'll use an example I used in another thread, because it's really one of the easiest ways to help you understand. For instance, say you start on the graphics section of the game. Alright, you think the graphics are good, but why are they good? What sets them apart from other, similar games? Are they brighter, more vibrant? What problems are there with the graphics? Are there graphical glitches anywhere, or do things sometimes look strange? What is the art style like (and please note this doesn't have to be one of the 'defined' art styles, just describe it in your own words!) and is that part of what makes the graphics better, or worse, than games similar?
And I see in your review that you have some problems with the camera. Okay, put things like that under a 'Controls' section. Talk about how hard or easy the controller set-up is. Can you get to an inventory (if there is one) easily? Are you able to move easily without feeling like you've got the worst tank-control setup in the world? Does the camera work properly, and if it doesn't, give a few examples as to where it is so bad. Like, does it go wonky when you go around corners, etc. Give examples! It helps. Don't be afraid to go into detail, seriously. Just remember to break your sections up into paragraphs so that it's easier to read. This's a good way to get people to read your review and get interested!
And to go along with what has already been said:
When you divide things into categories, pretend that you are trying to get a friend to play the game, and they are asking questions. So ask yourself some questions.
I'll use an example I used in another thread, because it's really one of the easiest ways to help you understand. For instance, say you start on the graphics section of the game. Alright, you think the graphics are good, but why are they good? What sets them apart from other, similar games? Are they brighter, more vibrant? What problems are there with the graphics? Are there graphical glitches anywhere, or do things sometimes look strange? What is the art style like (and please note this doesn't have to be one of the 'defined' art styles, just describe it in your own words!) and is that part of what makes the graphics better, or worse, than games similar?
And I see in your review that you have some problems with the camera. Okay, put things like that under a 'Controls' section. Talk about how hard or easy the controller set-up is. Can you get to an inventory (if there is one) easily? Are you able to move easily without feeling like you've got the worst tank-control setup in the world? Does the camera work properly, and if it doesn't, give a few examples as to where it is so bad. Like, does it go wonky when you go around corners, etc. Give examples! It helps. Don't be afraid to go into detail, seriously. Just remember to break your sections up into paragraphs so that it's easier to read. This's a good way to get people to read your review and get interested!