Square has made the Final Fantasy games that have left the world amazed, and Disney has made the films and stories that we all love and always have a happy ending. These two companies are both a lot alike in terms of popularity, and very different in terms of story; but when put together, they become an unstoppable couple. This game that they have made is one that has its deep dark story line from Square, and its humor and happiness from Disney. The game makes you interested and scared, and then gives you a relief and makes you happy. Now onto the game itself. The game starts with a beautiful music video that shows the main character Sora falling into a dark place with no explanation of why you're there. After the amazing scene, a mysterious voice with no source tells you about life in a very dark way. After the whole dark place, you wake up on the calm relaxing beach of Destiny Islands. Sora knows it was a dream but thinks in the back of his mind that it might be something else. This island is meant to calm the player down after the dark mysterious dream. That was just the beginning. Later Sora teams up with Goofy and Donald, and they travel to other Disney worlds and solve problems there by defeating the main enemies; Heartless. Now onto presentation. The game I think has music that always makes me smile when I play; especially Traverse Town's music. The graphics are good because they make them like a cartoon so it doesn't look bad, plus most of the Disney worlds were originally made as a cartoon. I loved playing this game because it felt really good seeing characters that I used to love when I was little, and I liked fighting heartless.The game is long compared to others but short compared to the Final Fantasy games. I found myself going back to the worlds a lot to find hidden items and other things. In difficulty, it's not that hard. I can see it being a challenge for a child or beginners, but not for people who have played and rpg before. If you put the game on expert then you are in for a challenge especially the optional boss fights. I found no problems with the game except for a couple of the worlds but there is just so much to say about this game and so little time so I think I'll end here.

This review is... alright.
You made it over 100 words, which is the minimum, but that doesn't make it a quality review,
First off, everything is jumbled up, which is not good.
I would suggest getting it so that like you put them in categories, making it easier to see and locate everything.
Also, go more into detail about those subjects.

An example:

Graphics
The graphics are good, they seem cartoon-like, which is a style that doesn't look bad, as most of the Disney worlds were made originally, as cartoons, blah blah blah etc...


Could just be me, though.
Other than that, the review is actually quite good. Keep it up man~

This isn't bad. And while Maguc offers some good tips, and that is indeed how a review that would be featured on Vizzed would be written, but it isn't absolutely necessary to write it that way.

The only thing this really needs is to be broken into paragraphs (like this reply), so it's easier to read through it all. It's a good piece though. Keep on writing and developing your style. I may actually have to buy this now.