it's ok but it should have had more work put into it i hate to say it but it's a really good game for a bad system.

This doesn't meet the requirements of a review, and for it to be considered one, it has to be at least 100 words long. I will take it easy since you are a newbie and you are just figuring out how things work around here, so i am going to give you some tips on how to make a better review: 

1. You should definitely break the review done into categories in order to talk about it more in depth, it would make it look better visually, but it also makes it appear more professional. 

2. Let your scores reflect  how you feel about the game and don't be afraid to express how you feel about the game, if it was good, score it high, and if it wasn't, then score it low. And don't be afraid to talk about the ups and downs of the game in your review, and say how it could be improved. 

3. Don't run on too long with your review, by giving either too many details or giving spoilers just to buff up your review. Keep it detailed, but not too long, I find that reviews in the 1000-2,000 word range are the best because it is detailed, but it still keeps you interested, anything longer either means you have repeated yourself too much, or there a few things you could take out. As long as you have gotten your point across, that is all that matters. 

And last but not least, space your review out, it looks professional and it makes it that much easier to read.


Just keep practicing and I assure you will get better at making reviews. It is just one of those things you get better at the more you do it. Hope this helped! 

until then, 

Local Mods : This should be moved to game discussion. 

I don't need to tell you anything that's been said already.  However, I was curious about something when I clicked on this link.  Is everything in the game red?  LOL I don't know if I could play a game where everything was a different shade of the same color. Maybe that's something you could talk about?

And why do you think the system is bad?

This isn't enough to be 100 words and it's not even good enough to even be a Game Discussion thread, so I'll just trash this review.
I won't get onto you too much because this was your first review, Just read this about making reviews and you'll be fine.