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Pac-Man A very simple, yet great game
08-01-13 07:15 PM
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Barathemos' Pac-Man review? A very simple, yet great
Barathemos' Pac-Man review? A very simple, yet great
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Whoa, breathtaking review! You just made me want to play this, I am a old pacman player too. I rate this a 10 out of 10, and I will surely play this thanks to your review. |
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Barathemos : lookin good man! you keep doing stuff like this and i bet when David quits vizzed he will make you the new owner of vizzed! |
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A few questions: 1) What is "multipal"? 2) How is this a complete thought? 3) Did you read over your review before you posted it? I found it hard to read your review. Quite honestly, I don't get how the users that posted before me could get all of the information from this review into their heads. Proofreading your review would probably help you out a lot if you want to write staff quality reviews. 1) What is "multipal"? 2) How is this a complete thought? 3) Did you read over your review before you posted it? I found it hard to read your review. Quite honestly, I don't get how the users that posted before me could get all of the information from this review into their heads. Proofreading your review would probably help you out a lot if you want to write staff quality reviews. |
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08-01-13 08:18 PM
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mlb789 : The only thing you have been doing right now is saying bad things about what I do. I am so sick of it. What makes you think I don't proofread? I might as well right the best that I can. I don't care if they are staff quality. I only care about doing the best I can do. That is all that matters to me. The reason they could understand it is that they knew what I was saying! So there are a few mistakes here and there, it is still saying what it needs to say. |
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noahd101 : David isn't gonna quit any time soon, And if he does retire, he's gonna lend the site to one of his family members. Barathemos : I agree with mlb. +1 Because it's not a bad review, but the formatting could use a whole lot of work _________________________________________________ Stuff that could use improvements: First off what is up with you're spacing. No offence man, but you're spacing is just crazy. You should at least contain all information in 1 run with quotation marks and periods, instead of constantly typing a new sentence. ?Spacing out between certain sentence's is not a bad thing, but a lot of this was spaced out in a bad way. embedding things: example: Barathemos' Pac-Man review. That isn't really embedded properly. It should be more formatted out like this Barathemos"pac-man review". 3) a lot of this review contained nothing much about the game, Just nonsence about stuff that we already know. When describing the graphics you should talk about what you see on screen. Not about How they changed graphics forever and what not, we don't really need all of that. 4) there is a thing such as too much detail, No offence. Example: do we really need to know what the start up screen sounds like? 5) proof reading, I understand my reviews aren't perfect with grammar, but this is pretty hard to read, like Mlb said. _________________________________________________ also... That last reply to mlb's post was kind of mean... Barathemos : I agree with mlb. +1 Because it's not a bad review, but the formatting could use a whole lot of work _________________________________________________ Stuff that could use improvements: First off what is up with you're spacing. No offence man, but you're spacing is just crazy. You should at least contain all information in 1 run with quotation marks and periods, instead of constantly typing a new sentence. ?Spacing out between certain sentence's is not a bad thing, but a lot of this was spaced out in a bad way. embedding things: example: Barathemos' Pac-Man review. That isn't really embedded properly. It should be more formatted out like this Barathemos"pac-man review". 3) a lot of this review contained nothing much about the game, Just nonsence about stuff that we already know. When describing the graphics you should talk about what you see on screen. Not about How they changed graphics forever and what not, we don't really need all of that. 4) there is a thing such as too much detail, No offence. Example: do we really need to know what the start up screen sounds like? 5) proof reading, I understand my reviews aren't perfect with grammar, but this is pretty hard to read, like Mlb said. _________________________________________________ also... That last reply to mlb's post was kind of mean... |
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08-02-13 04:20 PM
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SuperCrash64 : It was not about the review, he had been saying bad things about everything I do. "Here's an example: Barathemos' Pac-Man review. That isn't really embedded properly. It should be more formatted out like this Barathemos"pac-man review"' But Barathemos "pac-man review sounds like a dumb 6 year old said that. If you would mind to explain that it would really help prove your point. "Here's an example: Barathemos' Pac-Man review. That isn't really embedded properly. It should be more formatted out like this Barathemos"pac-man review"' But Barathemos "pac-man review sounds like a dumb 6 year old said that. If you would mind to explain that it would really help prove your point. |
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Barathemos : u are right what a jerko shut up and butt out whoever has a problem with his review |
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Local Mods : Please close this so it won't become a flame war. NO ONE POST AFTER THIS. NO ONE POST AFTER THIS. |
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Barathemos : Embedding things better would Make you're review look more professionial "pac-man" Simple as that, and also.. This is starting to turn into a flame war... Edit sorry for double summon, I got ninja'd ._. And plus, Mlb has done this to me before, I just considered taking his advice. |
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SuperCrash64 : I actually have to disagree with points 3, 4 and 5 of your first reply.
Barathemos : Thank you for alerting us to this issue. I would have preferred that the flaming hadn't started at all, but better late than never. Next time you feel you're being attacked verbally, please use the report button, rather than replying to them. noahd101 : I appreciate that you wanted to stand up for him, but that comment was a bit much. Please try not to flame in the future. Barathemos : Thank you for alerting us to this issue. I would have preferred that the flaming hadn't started at all, but better late than never. Next time you feel you're being attacked verbally, please use the report button, rather than replying to them. noahd101 : I appreciate that you wanted to stand up for him, but that comment was a bit much. Please try not to flame in the future. |
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