pinkiepie1010 : First off, your spacing is adequate which is good, but you need to divide up the five categories so your reviews are easier to read.If the categories are not separated, you will not get that many replies from other users.You may want to also mention some tips that may help other users when they play the game for themselves.But, yeah I do agree with Tails the Fox though.I know this might be your first game review, but you cannot express your opinion on the game too much, and for you to be aware I've seen other reviews have too much of the author's opinion about the game, so do not be ashamed about it.But like Tails said, include why you like the game so much, is it boring, fun, annoying, or in between?What I am saying is to describe the overall mood of the game.Second, write a lot more words than you did in this game review.Game reviews are usually five hundred to one thousand words long.Third, always include your rating of the game, you will not get many replies, or be very successful if you do not include your rating of each catogory.Rate the category out of ten, and describe why you give it that rating.Do not include too much of your opinion, like I said, if you want to get replies from other users, include a lot of detailed and informative information about how well the game is in that catogory.Fourth, try not to include things like,"I'm a big fan of Pokémon since it came out".No offense, but some people may not want to hear things like that.You need to instead say something like,"This game is for big Pokémon fans", or, "This game is for everyone that loves Pokémon and cannot get enough of it".You should either add that to your title, or at the beginning of your review, you will get more viewers that way.I hope this helps you, you can always pm me, or post a comment on my profile of any questions you may have. pinkiepie1010 : First off, your spacing is adequate which is good, but you need to divide up the five categories so your reviews are easier to read.If the categories are not separated, you will not get that many replies from other users.You may want to also mention some tips that may help other users when they play the game for themselves.But, yeah I do agree with Tails the Fox though.I know this might be your first game review, but you cannot express your opinion on the game too much, and for you to be aware I've seen other reviews have too much of the author's opinion about the game, so do not be ashamed about it.But like Tails said, include why you like the game so much, is it boring, fun, annoying, or in between?What I am saying is to describe the overall mood of the game.Second, write a lot more words than you did in this game review.Game reviews are usually five hundred to one thousand words long.Third, always include your rating of the game, you will not get many replies, or be very successful if you do not include your rating of each catogory.Rate the category out of ten, and describe why you give it that rating.Do not include too much of your opinion, like I said, if you want to get replies from other users, include a lot of detailed and informative information about how well the game is in that catogory.Fourth, try not to include things like,"I'm a big fan of Pokémon since it came out".No offense, but some people may not want to hear things like that.You need to instead say something like,"This game is for big Pokémon fans", or, "This game is for everyone that loves Pokémon and cannot get enough of it".You should either add that to your title, or at the beginning of your review, you will get more viewers that way.I hope this helps you, you can always pm me, or post a comment on my profile of any questions you may have. |