Hello this is bill14 here and this is my very first review of all time so I hope you will enjoy this and it is of one of the games that is my top 10 all favorite even though the game is my favorite I will not try to be to personal in the overall review of the game 




overview :the game is a game boy color game that is the second in the 3 Pokémon games for this generion so here how feel about the game in a whole the game has very good graphics for its time all so it will have you wanting to play though the game many of time to get the full effect of catching them all 



story: the story in this game is like all the rest of the Pokémon game you as a kid pick a Pokémon gain a rival in the story than fight a evil organization to save the world than you fight the elite four to become the Pokémon champion or what ever not to say it is a bad story but having play lots of Pokémon game  the story does get old very fast over time  but still with the return of team rocket it made the story a little more interesting to play though my score 9/10




depth: the game has a lot of thing to do for the old Pokémon game like the basic gym and save world stuff but in this game you can do lots more to me since you can find ho oh get lugia  and get the legendary dogs witch is not to fun at first but any true fans love to trill of hunting down the legend this game also lets you breed Pokémon to make eggs so you can make the hybrid Pokémon that will help you crush the elite four this feature is very nice and also with the day care you can train Pokémon up fast and don't have to worry about having Pokémon under leveled or something this game also has a bug catching contest with is fun for catch so kanto Pokémon that are rare to see or to find so gold only Pokémon also these contest might cause so stress since it is very hard to even place in the contest finally the game lets you return to kanto for so old school fun to once again crush the kanto gym leaders 9/10



addictiveness: well like I said before this is a Pokémon game and you will be tempted to catch all of the Pokémon and with kanto back you will be able to get all of your classic favorite back also not to much to say over that 9/10 



controls: the game control great and have no mess ups also I don't know of any 10/10



sound: the sound is ok for the most part but to me it can get annoying  and I sometimes find myself cutting it off  you may find the same in some of the part 6/10





graphics: the graphics in the game are great for a game that is made in its era like I said for controls I know of no mess up for this category but if I find them I will edit it  10/10


conclusion the game is good just cut off the sound and enjoy it for all the replay value and enjoyment 

Your review was fine, but you need to work on your grammar. The graphics part was literally one sentence. Add some punctuation and this will be much better. 

I loved Pokémon silver as well.

got you but like i said it was my first review i will get better as time goes on

bill14 : Good review. I appreciate the effort you put into it.

I think that you could clean up your grammar a little, also I think that your spacing needs help. One or two spaces is fine. It also helps if you keep this uniform throughout the entire review.