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Prologue to my Story

 

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   Hi, I'm new here, and today, I felt inspiration to write a story. So I started to write a line, and began to build a story around it. I have a short prologue now, and feedback would be great. Also, it does have a little gore, not really over the top, but just had to let you know. Here is the link. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dmsIjr-8WaJskQ4mGkH2P3iomxJLQCgYUpX1lmxqDOg/edit      One more thing, constructive criticism is awesome, but don't be like "I hate it blah blah blah", be courteous, and remember, this is just a rough cut, nothing is really hard set yet. Also, it is supposed to be confusing, its the prologue
   Hi, I'm new here, and today, I felt inspiration to write a story. So I started to write a line, and began to build a story around it. I have a short prologue now, and feedback would be great. Also, it does have a little gore, not really over the top, but just had to let you know. Here is the link. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dmsIjr-8WaJskQ4mGkH2P3iomxJLQCgYUpX1lmxqDOg/edit      One more thing, constructive criticism is awesome, but don't be like "I hate it blah blah blah", be courteous, and remember, this is just a rough cut, nothing is really hard set yet. Also, it is supposed to be confusing, its the prologue
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