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Chapter 9: Absolute
Absolute: not diminished, not total. OR complete, total, sheer. This goes out to my love.
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Chapter 9: Absolute

 

02-25-12 03:21 AM
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She can't catch the tears that stream down her smeared eyes,
It’s been far too long, he’s been away too long.
Her heart pounds angrily in her chest, she's desperate to shout
The words that one he and herself know.

Now, the cappella begins

His eye of wonder sees a universe,
Where neurotic nebulas bleed on one another,
Desperate chemicals, a fusion,
A fission of madness.

She leans in, kissing his lips longingly,
He finds her hands, and entwines their fingers, securely
Forget about the war behind us,
Forget about the Hell we've been through,
Forget about the past, this is now,
This is us.

Her lips brush over his ear, whispering
I love you, and no one could ever replace you,
You know that.

He raises her hands, placing them on his cheeks,
Delicate, warm, soft,
Their hearts fuse together,
One.

The moment he leaves, she misses him,
She repeats her same prayer each night to his sightless figure,
Closes her eyes, imagining when he sleeps beside her, arms keeping her safe,
She'd whisper into his ear whilst he slept: "I have the strongest feeling
That I'll dream about you tonight"

He said the words he never ever forgot to tell her,
He'd always wrap his arms around her,
Locking them in an embrace that protected their hearts,
Protected their moment.

Enough - should've never left it broken,
Should've held on, should've.

Now the hospital doors shut tight,
The monitor can be heard faintly,
Playing its routine melody,
They had the most of their last months of bliss,
He broke her heart, and mended it completely,
Now he wishes that accident never happened,
Now he wishes the blows never hit,
Now he wishes that she should've fought back,
But he knows right now, in the dark,
She fights.

Every day and every night,
He watches the hands of the clock wave their hours,
Watches the seconds tick routinely,
Waiting, hoping, praying
That she'll wake up,
Come back to him, smiling and laughing.

But he knows he's helpless and pathetic,
Because that's all he can do: pray and wait.

"You are mine, and I am yours, and forever to this, loyal I will be."

Come home, my love,
Come home to me,
I'm not the man I used to be without you,
And all I want is you to wake up
Walk through the doors, smiling,
And come home.

I love you, and I miss you.

Please wake up.
She can't catch the tears that stream down her smeared eyes,
It’s been far too long, he’s been away too long.
Her heart pounds angrily in her chest, she's desperate to shout
The words that one he and herself know.

Now, the cappella begins

His eye of wonder sees a universe,
Where neurotic nebulas bleed on one another,
Desperate chemicals, a fusion,
A fission of madness.

She leans in, kissing his lips longingly,
He finds her hands, and entwines their fingers, securely
Forget about the war behind us,
Forget about the Hell we've been through,
Forget about the past, this is now,
This is us.

Her lips brush over his ear, whispering
I love you, and no one could ever replace you,
You know that.

He raises her hands, placing them on his cheeks,
Delicate, warm, soft,
Their hearts fuse together,
One.

The moment he leaves, she misses him,
She repeats her same prayer each night to his sightless figure,
Closes her eyes, imagining when he sleeps beside her, arms keeping her safe,
She'd whisper into his ear whilst he slept: "I have the strongest feeling
That I'll dream about you tonight"

He said the words he never ever forgot to tell her,
He'd always wrap his arms around her,
Locking them in an embrace that protected their hearts,
Protected their moment.

Enough - should've never left it broken,
Should've held on, should've.

Now the hospital doors shut tight,
The monitor can be heard faintly,
Playing its routine melody,
They had the most of their last months of bliss,
He broke her heart, and mended it completely,
Now he wishes that accident never happened,
Now he wishes the blows never hit,
Now he wishes that she should've fought back,
But he knows right now, in the dark,
She fights.

Every day and every night,
He watches the hands of the clock wave their hours,
Watches the seconds tick routinely,
Waiting, hoping, praying
That she'll wake up,
Come back to him, smiling and laughing.

But he knows he's helpless and pathetic,
Because that's all he can do: pray and wait.

"You are mine, and I am yours, and forever to this, loyal I will be."

Come home, my love,
Come home to me,
I'm not the man I used to be without you,
And all I want is you to wake up
Walk through the doors, smiling,
And come home.

I love you, and I miss you.

Please wake up.
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(edited by SourcedRemorses on 02-25-12 03:23 AM)    

03-02-12 02:03 PM
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And here I am, commenting on the poem you wrote for me. You say you were pathetic because all you could do was pray, but Matt, It was you that got me out of the coma. I tried for you. I came back for you. I could hear you in my heart, I didn't need Ryan telling me anything. I could hear you myself, I could hear the pain. I would often try and reach out to you with my heart, hoping you could feel me. I love you. He is mine, and I am his, forever to this, loyal I will be. L'amore della mia vita <3
And here I am, commenting on the poem you wrote for me. You say you were pathetic because all you could do was pray, but Matt, It was you that got me out of the coma. I tried for you. I came back for you. I could hear you in my heart, I didn't need Ryan telling me anything. I could hear you myself, I could hear the pain. I would often try and reach out to you with my heart, hoping you could feel me. I love you. He is mine, and I am his, forever to this, loyal I will be. L'amore della mia vita <3
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03-02-12 02:28 PM
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You've rendered my speechless by not just your post to my poem, which I wrote... off the top of my head, but also how you've once again, proved the doctor's predictions wrong, by coming home early, to me. I knew you'd fight in the dark, I always see you as a fighter, determined and fiesty - that's how I describe you in really basic terms, to anyone. They don't quite picture what I see and know, and that's the little things I love about you. How you're determined to get through things, I admire it so much. You've taught me how to be stronger in times of deep worry, you've taught me how to get up on my feet again, you make me determined, and I have so much faith in you. I did feel you, I felt you trying your hardest, and I tried holding onto you. I'd watch the clock, I'd wake up each day, or during the night, hoping for any news about - the good news, of course. Sometimes I had my moments of doubt and loss; I'd find myself weak and powerless, helpless and pathetic, only being able to pray for you to come home, safe, fine, smiling, laughing; all those things I love about you.

I'm so glad you're home, and I'm so glad you're OK. There's things that will take time to recover, and no doubt, you will be better. No need to worry or be self-conscious about any of your aftermath problems, because they get better. I've been in a couple of comas before too, and had similar signs, so I know for sure how it feels, and what happens.

I love you too, so much. You are mine, and I am yours, forever to this, I will be,

Ad meliora, animo et corde ♥ 
You've rendered my speechless by not just your post to my poem, which I wrote... off the top of my head, but also how you've once again, proved the doctor's predictions wrong, by coming home early, to me. I knew you'd fight in the dark, I always see you as a fighter, determined and fiesty - that's how I describe you in really basic terms, to anyone. They don't quite picture what I see and know, and that's the little things I love about you. How you're determined to get through things, I admire it so much. You've taught me how to be stronger in times of deep worry, you've taught me how to get up on my feet again, you make me determined, and I have so much faith in you. I did feel you, I felt you trying your hardest, and I tried holding onto you. I'd watch the clock, I'd wake up each day, or during the night, hoping for any news about - the good news, of course. Sometimes I had my moments of doubt and loss; I'd find myself weak and powerless, helpless and pathetic, only being able to pray for you to come home, safe, fine, smiling, laughing; all those things I love about you.

I'm so glad you're home, and I'm so glad you're OK. There's things that will take time to recover, and no doubt, you will be better. No need to worry or be self-conscious about any of your aftermath problems, because they get better. I've been in a couple of comas before too, and had similar signs, so I know for sure how it feels, and what happens.

I love you too, so much. You are mine, and I am yours, forever to this, I will be,

Ad meliora, animo et corde ♥ 
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