legacyme3
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So what was the point?
Did we have fun?
I broke you, and you destroyed me,
We live like this, in harmony.

It's weird to think,
This animosity can,
And is thought of by me,
As pure peace.

I loved you like family,
And you to me,
Things between us were tight,
Things happened.

We aren't so tight anymore,
I lost,
You lost,
Everyone around us lost.

I envy you,
You don't listen to what people say,
I'm a mess, because of that,
I do every little thing

And for what?
To get a little shred
Of their approval,
To wear on my shoulder,

I don't deserve anything I've been given,
I don't want to continue causing hurt.
I don't feel like this is fair,
But I know I gotta keep pushing.

I broke you, yes,
But you destroyed me.
Now I am in a million pieces,
And I can't put myself together.

A million little segments,
A legion of a thousand people,
Telling me what piece goes where,
The puzzle is messed up, I am a freak.

Dewgong
#Goodbye
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hackerman
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I really like your poems you have been making but i'm curios as to why you named this one "Back Itch"?

Hero of Hyrule
2nd Place In The June 2011 VCS 7th Place In the July 2011 VCS
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Snowdeath
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Really nice poem, but hackerman is right, why did you call it Back Itch?

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POKeMAD
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i really like your poems did you call it back itch because you feel youve become dissensitised to such things and its now a simple niggily pain? :o

Darknut
..should probably be doing something
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crazycatpup
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Wow thats deep I littarly just read it 50 times.
I have to agree with everyone why is it called back itch?

Kangaskhan
My heart lingers in the past, my soul continues on, till the day my heart is set free.
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