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05-08-20 08:36 AM
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This is the song for my band's new album, Troubadour! It's the title track!!!


Troubadour

I am a troubadour
of the open road
the only thing I know
I don't know where I'm going

We will go for miles
on a trail of tears
the only thing I know
We will go for years

You know me
And I know
And from what I've seen
Only the road is true

Here's a video of us playing the music for reference:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vsEBwVih4I4
This is the song for my band's new album, Troubadour! It's the title track!!!


Troubadour

I am a troubadour
of the open road
the only thing I know
I don't know where I'm going

We will go for miles
on a trail of tears
the only thing I know
We will go for years

You know me
And I know
And from what I've seen
Only the road is true

Here's a video of us playing the music for reference:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vsEBwVih4I4
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It sounds a lot better sung than when read. Plus the instrumental is pretty sick. I could see this getting you somewhere. Nice job!
It sounds a lot better sung than when read. Plus the instrumental is pretty sick. I could see this getting you somewhere. Nice job!
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05-08-20 03:11 PM
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That's pretty good, good job! Hopefully things go well for you with that music.
That's pretty good, good job! Hopefully things go well for you with that music.
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Nice job. It's always hard to just read lyrics and get a grasp of a song. (I mean well obviously it's not really music without the music lul)

It sounded good with the instrumentation though... Keep up the good work. Don't forget to have fun either.. It makes the whole thing a lot easier and relaxed.
Nice job. It's always hard to just read lyrics and get a grasp of a song. (I mean well obviously it's not really music without the music lul)

It sounded good with the instrumentation though... Keep up the good work. Don't forget to have fun either.. It makes the whole thing a lot easier and relaxed.
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